Mira_Diem
Dear Author, I really like this book. I like the MC. She is OP in some way but her personality is not perfect which makes up for that. She's strong but cares for her teammates. Reirei who is constantly bullied by her makes me laugh and her interactions with her teammates also add a comedic spice to the story. There is a lot of diverse characters with various personalities which makes you feel hook as they aren't like other supporting characters who are only there for appearances. They actually have their own thoughts and dialogues and you can tell what kind of personality they have from that alone. I've noticed that some people don't like the ML. I also have my doubts against him but it's only 60 chapters or so in the story and we haven't seen his POV yet and he has only appeared once or twice? so there might be more to the story since we only know what the ML is like due to MC's POV. Also, I am curious about their previous life together since some things are not clarified. To be honest, I feel like the MC who shows a favorable attitude towards the Lin guy might be a hint that he's a second male lead? I am only guessing but the guy is eleven years older than her. I know that MC is mentally older because she's reborn but this age gap is still a bit unsettling for me. Anyway, the readers only know what happens because, for the most part, everything in the first 60 or so chapters is focused on MC and only shows things on her point of view so there are might be more plot twists to the story.
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
That was a long, LONG synopsis, much more like a chapter. Too much information. But you get the idea about the story, so you can chose to continue or not. The writing quality in the first few chapters looked kinda pressed. I didn't read the latest chapter so can't tell. the story development was quite fast paced as in all the novels in WN. GOODDAY WRITING.
This is novel is the best I love it I probably say this in a lot of my reviews but I mean it I just love all the characters. the story is fact paced but I don't mind. love the FL and her group can't wait for her to meet the ml and show everybody how badass she really is! Keep up the good work I am rooting for you! Ps: I will dedicate my power stones to you! :p