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lstreader5dReplied to RoughSeaUnless I missed it, they didn't even mention learning Thunder Wave too
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You mean Staravia? Staraptors are 1.2 m
Through this period of training, Tailow's size had increased significantly. From its original height of about 0.3 meters, it had grown to about 0.5 meters, almost catching up to poorly developed Staraptors. - lstreader11dReplied to yellowjacket65
ascend*
In case something unexpected happens, the camp has orders to gather their equipment and descend to the 37th floor. - lstreader21dCommented
I'm not sure if this is because it's an AU, but there have been non-human chancellors before
Although the Senate isn't overtly racist, as they have all sorts of races populating its many seats, only humans have ever been elected Chancellor, which is why he was relying so heavily on his apprentice at the moment. - lstreader1mthCommented
How would that Vulpix end up there, I thought Alola was a newly found region by the time Ash traveled there, and this point it would have been completely unknown
The white Pokemon was actually a version of Vulpix that was from the Alola Region. Carolina had heard about it before but thought they were only legends since they rarely left their mountains. But after checking out the typing of the Pokemon and running various tests, she finally confirmed that it was indeed a member of the elusive version of this Pokemon. - lstreader1mthCommented
Thought it was white and not purple
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Yoriichi had a wife before so he knows how to properly interact with others, I don't think he was this socially inept
Yoriichi didn't know what to do other than stand still until she calmed down while the man went to short hair woman - lstreader1mthCommented
Need to make sure to add commas
The Galactic Republic Senator from Chalacta Yudrish Sedran. - lstreader1mthCommented
Sake*
"Oi! Brat! Get me a bottle of Saki!" Said a drunken man in a black wife beater and jeans. - lstreader1mthCommented
Earth is still there though? Night City is just that, a city.
When he awoke, he found himself in a world that was nothing like the one he had known. Earth was gone, replaced by Night City, a place of extremes and excess. The accident had left him scarred, and he had been forced to turn to the dark side of cyberware to rebuild his shattered body. - lstreader2mthCommented
Dude just said how he should take it easy and then immediately goes and does all that
"Too easy... couldn't they make it stronger?" I muttered, surveying the colossus. - lstreader2mthCommentedFujin smiled and muttered, "The name of my alliance will be Phantom Haven Society."
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I thought this dude had perfect memory or smtn
'Well let's see, the first movie was about a snake. The second one was about the black flying soul-sucking monsters. The third one was about the stone. I remember that the fourth one was about the competition. Can't remember the fifth one, the sixth one was the one where the old headmaster dies. And the seventh one was the one in which the pink goblin called Tommy dies. The last one was about the war that takes place in Hogwarts.' He wrote down as he muttered. - lstreader2mthReplied to Hongchen
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1) We blitz through the academy arc, 10-12 chapters max - lstreader2mthCommented
"Enormously powerful power" sounds a bit ridiculous. Perhaps just say "There is no way she could have sensed anything" or something like that
Since I am very sure that my powers aren't leaking, there is no way she could have sensed my enormously powerful power since I am very sure that I am hiding my energy very well - lstreader3mthCommented
I might be rusty on HP knowledge, but isn't it Patronum?
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Maybe this is partially AU, but I've never read anywhere in source material that said Shaak Ti was anything special. Sure, she was a Jedi Master which is special by itself, but she wasn't even close to be a top tier Jedi
Another 5 months goes by and there still hasn't been any Jedi coming to Shili, but that just meant more time preparing myself and spending time with the people I call family, as well as the villagers I live with. A month ago, my parents saw that I was finally able to levitate a small stuffed animal with the force, and they were extremely excited and the entire village threw a party. So when the day finally came, they were excited when a Jedi Master was at our front door. My mother came into my room, "Ossa! You have a very important visitor that wishes to see you." She had a big smile on her face, I was kind of sad when I knew I'd be taken away and I thought of what how it would affect them.. I push the thought away as I walk out of my room into the living room, where one of my favorite Jedi stood, Shaak Ti. A Togruta Jedi Master who was extremely talented and considered one of the most powerful and influential Jedi, only being beaten by Yoda, Yaddle, or Mace Windu.. I tried not to show my excitment, yet, in front of Shaak Ti, she obviously noticed. "Hello young one, I'm Jedi Master Shaak Ti, what is your name?" she said with her calming voice. "Ossa Karil is my name. Nice to meet you." I say with a small smile. "You really are walking with the Force.. So strong with you. Ah, sorry for my rambling. Allow me to explain a little. The Jedi Order has a device called a Holocron that is able to list force-sensitive children. Almost a month before Ossa's name appeared on the Holocron, the wisest Jedi currently alive felt a huge surge within the force, and indicating to him a possible prodigy being born. The ripples through the force lead, specifically myself, to Shili, and brought me here. The moment I laid eyes on Ossa, I knew she was the one Master Yoda felt." The news shocked my parents, hearing your child is a Jedi prodigy is probably a great honor and huge thing. - lstreader3mthCommented
My guess is John Lennon bc he was born in ’40
J.L. 1957 - - lstreader3mthCommented
I've been wondering, why do you keep saying humanity for things? Is it a translation and you are trying to write body? That's the best guess I have
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