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Great Potential! the entire novel runs like a movie. While, at times, it can be choppy, nothing is taken away from this piece of work. The main character is intelligent and cunning. And I, for one, can't wait for how everything plays out in this world...Who doesn't like zombies, not to mention mutations? I can wait to see what happens next. Keep at it ^_^
Solid beginning, can always enjoy some accidental scientific research crafted zombies. If I were to nitpick, a bit more clarity as to who is talking between their initial description and giving their name the first time will help with a smoother reading process. Adding to my library to continue reading later for sure :D
The moment i read the plot I knew this story was a good one. And so far, I'm right! Even though i read only the first few chapters I can easily tell that this is going to get more mysterious than ever! Definitely, adding this in my collection cuz I love thriller genre and this story i can not ignore :))
Definitely hooked. Soren as a character speaks to me personally. One nitpick I have not to have a chapter named failed escape if the chapter is about escaping. Other than that, the story's construction is superb, and I definitely like the details you paint each character with, like the fishing shop hat. I'm down for more.