Review Detail of Lord_Damocles in Collateral

Great Potential! the entire novel runs like a movie. While, at times, it can be choppy, nothing is taken away from this piece of work. The main character is intelligent and cunning. And I, for one, can't wait for how everything plays out in this world...Who doesn't like zombies, not to mention mutations? I can wait to see what happens next. Keep at it ^_^