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Item: Collateral
Rating: 5

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Johnsonlong696969Lv33yrJohnsonlong696969

Definitely hooked. Soren as a character speaks to me personally. One nitpick I have not to have a chapter named failed escape if the chapter is about escaping. Other than that, the story's construction is superb, and I definitely like the details you paint each character with, like the fishing shop hat. I'm down for more.

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val_the_mysteriousAuthorval_the_mysterious

Fair enough. I don't think I realized what I was doing when I wrote the chapter name, it's changed now. Glad you enjoyed it. I'm proud of Soren as a character.

3yr