Reviews of Change The World

This novel has much potential because of the idea. I never heard of something similar so that's a plus for me. The synopsis is very interesting so I'm really curious on how you manage to create this certain atmosphere. For the first chapter it is good but I think that you forget about the surroundings of the MC. When you describe his environment it creates a better reading quality for the readers. Also I think you rushed the story a bit to get to your main beginning. That can lead to confusion in the future.Of course it's only the first chapter so I think that you will introduce the deepness of the story as well as describing the future path in the upcoming chapters. I like how you wrote the development of the MC and his inner changes. This makes it more understandable for me. Overall I like it and I will read it on. Keep up the good work. I have high expectations for you.

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Wow, just saw the synopsis and was stunned. Interesting description and especially the quotes are worth a discussion. Because there already were some reviews I decided to join in. ---This is my first review on a novel just so you know--- Maybe I'm too simple but I personally like the story very much and the MC's decisions surprised me. The way he acted was very drastically but necessary as you said. The main reason I like this so much is because you can't always predict the MC's next steps or decisions. Like he said it's a switch up of the standard Isekai genre. Have to agree on the speaking aspect. Letting him talk in 3rd person would be better. In the end it's worth to be in my the library and good to read.

I like this novel very much. The world's background is described less than I expected, so please describe it more in the next chapters. Have to agree with the other comments on the aspect of speaking. The MC should talk to someone else or to himself in third person because as time goes on it will be more difficult to understand him. To conclude, I have to say it has big potential but the writer has to improve on the quality aswell as the additional content. Still it's a good story for the first work of him.

I just found this novel in the "new" section. The synopsis is very exciting so I started to read it. From the beginnig on it is very interesting but you use the word I too much. Like you said in the author's thoughts I would be better to let him speak out what he thinks or to let him speak directly to another person. He changes very drastically in this short amount of time. I think that it was a bit too much but that's just my opinion. Other readers can understand that better than I do. We don't need to talk about the Isekai aspect because it's very common that this transportation to another world has a very absurd and unlogical reason so that's not really a problem. Like the commentar above said you need to describe his environment more. You didn't mention one thing about the king or the folk there but maybe you will do that in the future so that's not really a critic I can give just yet. Overall I enjoyed reading it and I'm curious on how the story goes on and if it can fulfill the expectations of the description. P.S. please let him speak out loud and to other characters aswell. Thx <3