Review Detail of DarkCloud1497 in Change The World

I like this novel very much. The world's background is described less than I expected, so please describe it more in the next chapters. Have to agree with the other comments on the aspect of speaking. The MC should talk to someone else or to himself in third person because as time goes on it will be more difficult to understand him. To conclude, I have to say it has big potential but the writer has to improve on the quality aswell as the additional content. Still it's a good story for the first work of him.