Review Detail of MisterRose77 in Change The World

I just found this novel in the "new" section. The synopsis is very exciting so I started to read it. From the beginnig on it is very interesting but you use the word I too much. Like you said in the author's thoughts I would be better to let him speak out what he thinks or to let him speak directly to another person. He changes very drastically in this short amount of time. I think that it was a bit too much but that's just my opinion. Other readers can understand that better than I do. We don't need to talk about the Isekai aspect because it's very common that this transportation to another world has a very absurd and unlogical reason so that's not really a problem. Like the commentar above said you need to describe his environment more. You didn't mention one thing about the king or the folk there but maybe you will do that in the future so that's not really a critic I can give just yet. Overall I enjoyed reading it and I'm curious on how the story goes on and if it can fulfill the expectations of the description. P.S. please let him speak out loud and to other characters aswell. Thx <3