Review Detail of Lonewolf11 in Change The World

This novel has much potential because of the idea. I never heard of something similar so that's a plus for me. The synopsis is very interesting so I'm really curious on how you manage to create this certain atmosphere. For the first chapter it is good but I think that you forget about the surroundings of the MC. When you describe his environment it creates a better reading quality for the readers. Also I think you rushed the story a bit to get to your main beginning. That can lead to confusion in the future.Of course it's only the first chapter so I think that you will introduce the deepness of the story as well as describing the future path in the upcoming chapters. I like how you wrote the development of the MC and his inner changes. This makes it more understandable for me. Overall I like it and I will read it on. Keep up the good work. I have high expectations for you.