Biako
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The story development is well paced, leading to a constant feeling of anticipation building up within the reader (in a good way). The author sticks with a type of magic/theme that he has used before, meaning that the background mechanics of the story can be presented in a clear and understandable fashion.
This novel at the beginning was a bit meh, but because of the well done writing and the way magic seemed to work along with I assume cultivation everything got much better as time went on and with it I'm really hoping for a new chapter pretty soon seeing I am definitely in love with this and I say keep up the amazing work my friend and I hope to see you create more things like this and for a recommendation if you ever do is think making a slight school system like the current one except with a system for the mc and they slowly level up as a vampire 👀 I've seen one do such and I wanna see someone with a better mind go with such at idea to a possible greater aspect/skill
I started reading that one after reading another one of Biako's novel and i must say I really like that writing style it's neither slow not too fast in plot developpement, though there is some mistakes here and there it doesn't really matter. I hope you don't drop any of your works because so far I really like them Mr/Ms Author 😁