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Shameles autor here just to say that this is one of the worst but at the same time best twilight fan-fics you have ever read in your life before... of course, after our all might CORNBRINGER. WE WORK FOR THE CORN!

this is the best Twilight story I ever read has the best storyline how you explain he is a hybrid but you can fix how he transforms in to a wolf but it is good keep it up

A word of advice, if you're not funny, don't try to be. Lucifer? really? well that doesn't detract from the plot, but I think it's a little out of place. Other than the lousy, seriously, terrible jokes, and maybe the occasional grammatical error, there's nothing wrong. At least this author understands that his jokes can be improved, to put it mildly, the only thing worse than a bad comedian is a bad comedian who thinks he's good. Overall a decent story.