Forest Of Elves
don't bother after chapter 40. the quality of the translation gets too horrible around when you start paying. also the lack of detail in what is being taught to the dark elves is such a missed opportunity. it was done ONCE in the first 50 chapters. afterwards it assumes that the elves simply channel the magic and don't recite english words for spells. it's trash writing. I also don't like how the theme of "dark elf population loss" is forwarding the idea of using ethnic cleansing as "revenge".
After persevering through the first 65 chapters of this novel, I ultimately had to give up. Up until that point, the story had been a rollercoaster of confusion, filled with too many gaps in information and an onslaught of new characters who seemed to materialize out of thin air, leaving the reader without a proper introduction or context. The novel began on a promising note, drawing readers in with a captivating start. However, the sudden and inexplicable time jump, plot gaps, or perhaps even entire chapters missing, marred the reading experience. This abrupt shift in storytelling disrupted the narrative flow, making it challenging to follow the plot and the character developments. While I was disheartened by these issues, if the novel improves significantly towards the end, please do let me know. Despite my frustrations, I'm still hopeful that the story might redeem itself in later chapters. A strong conclusion could potentially salvage the reading experience, and I'd be willing to reconsider my initial assessment.
interested with this because the synopsis just the bad point from my experience with this -fatal grammar error (wrong gender {as you expect it's MTL}) -weird idea from MC, make half-elf for continuing and bring more "elf", but at the same time implement "blood purity privilege" -so many(?) hole in plot -maybe more?, idk
What really disappointed me is that they never explained execution of magic and how they worked. All we know is that English is magic and stronger the caster stronger spell. We have no idea of the incantation or if every sentence is magic. It's was a easy and interesting mechanism to explore. The fls makes fireflies that burn on impact, acid rain, illusions, etc and how they work or the incantation are unknown. I mean even some of the trashiest novel have better explained magic than this novel.
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Teacher - Disciples ๐คฆ๐คฆ๐คฆ I can't help it but to shake my head. Those novels I've read so far makes me wanna kick the MC's face.๐๐๐ OP Master = OP Disciples Abnormal Master = Abnormal Disciples Braggart Master = Braggart Disciples Puttui. Here we go again. I think my brain was damaged just thinking the future. ๐ญ๐๐ค
This the first time I've read a Webnovel that was this new. I will say that it isn't perfect, but I thoroughly enjoyed it all the same! If the author can fix up some of these issues, we would have a real winner on our hands here. I'll start with the positives. The novel is very fast paced and doesn't really linger for too long. I also just generally like stories where the main character is a teacher and gets stronger by teaching others! Now onto the criticisms I have. The story is about learning english as a magic language, yet the english itself is not the best. It isn't terrible by any means, but it frequently gets the pronouns for characters wrong. Another problem(at least for me) is the lack of transparency with the main character's system. We know that he gets points for teaching students and that he needs 999 to get his sight back. We also know that he can buy other things with the teaching points that can help his students and/or himself. The problem is that we never get enough information about those things. We don't know exactly how much points he earns for teaching students, how much points he has at any given time, or what other things he can buy in the shop besides the things he has already bought. Because of this ambiguity, it feels like the author can just make the main character do/buy anything at any time without the author having to plan ahead. Part of the fun of the system is seeing it and then thinking what he might do or get next with it, but you hide it away. Moving on to other criticisms, you should probably add more tags besides just fantasy. At least add the system tag. Probably also the kingdom building tag. Maybe the teacher tag. Just add more tags so it is more appealing to people that look at it. Anyways, I hope this Webnovel keeps going and improves over time!
Pros: Decent and interesting fantasy world delves into a magic system that vast majority of world knows about but canโt use. Focuses on a small cast of characters that is slowly expanded upon. Cons: Poor translation with pronouns and plurals constistent throughout, easy fixes that have been ignored makes it confusing at times to attempt to read. MC is somehow completely oblivious throughout even when itโs obvious to the point itโs annoying and makes dumb decisions with his shop system. System not expanded or explained well. Magic wielding elfโs stomp all non magic opponents with ease no sense of damager.
The first arc is good where he is blind because the story development is concise and good but after he cured his eye it felt like the story is been force to continue.. This is also many missing plot... Im sorry if I offended some reader here but I dont think its my liking which looks like the plot is force in the story it felt like putting huge amount salt in your coffee, it doesn't suit at all even a little !