wtpak almost all lines are unrealistic.if my parents is like this, you can already tell that they don't like you, it felt like his parent are just there to fill in the gaps and word counts.it felt like his parent are so naive.

wtpak almost all lines are unrealistic.if my parents is like this, you can already tell that they don't like you, it felt like his parent are just there to fill in the gaps and word counts.it felt like his parent are so naive.

Kind of brutal if you think deeply about it🤣🤣😂

but bro with his competitive nature as the author said, ain't gonna happen.That's a god right there bro, A final boss which might take the 2-3years before it will be defeated.

Bro! Read seriously brother you don't have to be like that. I mean its okay to comment like that but men you need to accept it, we got influenced by webnovel even word like that is everywhere in good novel like Chrysalis, Or other best novel there is!It pretty common actually!!

best novel there is out there!!

The first arc is good where he is blind because the story development is concise and good but after he cured his eye it felt like the story is been force to continue.. This is also many missing plot... Im sorry if I offended some reader here but I dont think its my liking which looks like the plot is force in the story it felt like putting huge amount salt in your coffee, it doesn't suit at all even a little !

im petty as fruck to so im in too.!

OPM and Solo leveling workout routine suddenly pop out of my mind

first chapter might be a so so. but hmnnn it just kinda of good with this chapter. This chapter cover the first chapter.

good job making this one satisfying author

of I see one of this again I'm out. I promise

I don't know if I will read this book or just ignore it.. but seeing this warzone I think I'm good to read this...

Cannot get more complicated hehheh I like this author

is this some kind of Speedrun ??? hehehehe just kidding...

I don't know if it was only me or someone also notice it.. but I feel like some of the MC problem has been force from him by reasoning that, that is the work of the system.. like it didn't felt like naturally. I felt like the author force some problem to the MC.. I'm not saying this is not good, even me I'll rate the world background 5 star because of its uniqueness but it's story development is just so... but still I'll continue this maybe it's just improve 😜😜

2017* sorry for the typo...

This is not my real account. This is just the account of my friend. So don't you dare say a level one account like this is saying "I'm full of shyt" cause I been reading in we novel since 2016..

The world background and character design is very good.. I'd like to praise the author for that but the most irritating part is that almost every chapter has plot armor that any old reader can predict... I'm not criticizing this novel but the author who must not put too much plot armor that almost made up the whole novel.. Cause I can't take to much shyt, it became too much predictable with this much plot armor like author suddenly making the antagonist IQ level so low... how could you just make the Cullen bastard do shyt like making him fight the boss directly when he can't even beat the shyt out of level 3 wolf now you want him to face level 8 boss wolf... dumb shyt author ...huu... I'm really in rage right now sorry about this... I'm just teaching the author about the pain of us old reader...