Review Detail of John_Kula in Being Blind For Five Years, All My Disciples Became Forbidden Curse Mages

This the first time I've read a Webnovel that was this new. I will say that it isn't perfect, but I thoroughly enjoyed it all the same! If the author can fix up some of these issues, we would have a real winner on our hands here. I'll start with the positives. The novel is very fast paced and doesn't really linger for too long. I also just generally like stories where the main character is a teacher and gets stronger by teaching others! Now onto the criticisms I have. The story is about learning english as a magic language, yet the english itself is not the best. It isn't terrible by any means, but it frequently gets the pronouns for characters wrong. Another problem(at least for me) is the lack of transparency with the main character's system. We know that he gets points for teaching students and that he needs 999 to get his sight back. We also know that he can buy other things with the teaching points that can help his students and/or himself. The problem is that we never get enough information about those things. We don't know exactly how much points he earns for teaching students, how much points he has at any given time, or what other things he can buy in the shop besides the things he has already bought. Because of this ambiguity, it feels like the author can just make the main character do/buy anything at any time without the author having to plan ahead. Part of the fun of the system is seeing it and then thinking what he might do or get next with it, but you hide it away. Moving on to other criticisms, you should probably add more tags besides just fantasy. At least add the system tag. Probably also the kingdom building tag. Maybe the teacher tag. Just add more tags so it is more appealing to people that look at it. Anyways, I hope this Webnovel keeps going and improves over time!