Reviews of Becoming a Monster

Good story! You actually made de mc loss of humanity seem realistic, considering the circumstances and all the characters feel alive too. The only bad thing about the story so far is that there are not enough chapters.

Summary: Noah will abandon all his ideals for women, will kill strangers but enemies have plot armor thicker than the earths crust Noah - MC - classic bullied past, allows himself to be bullied has no problem killing anyone but enemies who he will save and let go for them to try and kill him again or poison people against him quality of updates is good story development so far is very cliche, you could copy and paste it writing quality is better than MTL for the most part character design....yea...i don't want to go there world background hasn't been explored too much, entire time is in school

couldn't help my self from joining to check out this novel after seeing the screenshots. I won't go off my personal feelings. Quality is okay, it's readable but you need a new protag, this one isn't cutting it this dude is just too bland good luck though, don't let the screenshots get you down...eh...whatever

मैं इस कहानी का आनंद ले रहा था जब तक कि उसने लड़की को बचाना शुरू नहीं किया, फिर एक और लड़की आती है और वह उसके लिए पागल हो जाता है और साजिश वास्तव में उसके साथ मजबूर महसूस करती है जो बुरे लोगों को बचाती है जो उसे चोट पहुंचाना चाहते हैं लेकिन वह दूसरे को मारता है जैसे हम जानते हैं कि क्या ह ाेती है🤨

If the synopsis is already written poorly, why would you even start to read?

La historia podría ser mejor pero el personaje principal es un poco tonto y miente sobre las cosas que dice que hará y hace lo contrario, se enamora de una mujer y hace todo por ella y el amor llega demasiado rápido, es como tonto pero seguire leyendo

i have peace in my heart even for simp MC, one day he will break free maybe but not killing enemy who try to kill u multiple time in face even buddha would have trouble

I will try to leave an unbiased review even if author has come out as a violent homophobe Noah, the main character of the novel embodies these values as he will do anything for a female but female villains will walk all over him and he allows them to attempt to kill him over and over this kind of discrimination is taken to the next level, i cant believe people have this attitude in this day and age and think "boyfriend" is an insult the mc is disgusting

Writing Quality -- Between MTL and human, somewhat edible for the eyes updates ehhh Story development -- we are stuck in the school for ...well everything that is out from what i read and heard other people talking about online character design -- this dude does a complete 180, turns from killing people to letting enemies live when they try to kill him over and over and are still trying BECAUSE I'M NOAH!!!! and turns into a simp out of nowhere when we believed him to be cold background -- we haven't really seen anything or heard much about the world

The grammar is not up to par…. Don’t waste your time reading this, it’s an okay read if you literally have nothing else to read. So like I said, just don’t waste your precious time on this novel.

I came here to check why no chapter was posted for awhile to see this situation. It is unfortunate that this novel is being harassed by trolls or the woke crowd. Example someone saying how mc is simp cause he kills males but not females ect yet the novel shows his mindset on what he is thinking for his actions not to mention he has killed plenty indirectly of both male and female. Also he doesn’t kill the males at times also and even saves them for benefits. Mc personality is about growing stronger and doing things that will benefit him though we still see his internal struggles and how he is growing. TLDR Most if not all low reviews are just trolls or what people consider the woke crowd attacking the novel as you will notice the same thing being repeated on the low reviews like simp or mtl (if this is mtl then I wish all mtl was like this) Hope the author gets this resolved and comes back as it is a good novel. Ps I am obviously a bot account that has been undercover for years just for this moment is probably what the negative reviewers(The ones that are like the ones I describes above) would say.

our mc has a volatile, unstable personality that changes from chapter to chapter and by his creator's mood, the world is not explored or explained and the synopsis is vague, the main character is also easily classified as a simp

Just finished reading and like the new review format, I will try my best! SIMP (MC): I will be the strongest, no one will bully me!!! Male-1: HEY YOU, I AM PENG UNIVERSITY YOUNG JOCK, BOW! SIMP: DIEEEE MALE!!!! Male-1: AHHHHH nooo wait Girl-1: Wait SIMP I just met, you cannot kill SIMP: Yes my love who i just met Girl-1: Carry me to safety and the man who tried to kill you too SIMP: yes my queen Girl-1: good simp, *pats head* SIMP: HOW DARE YOU TRY TO KILL ME DIE!!!!! Villain-1: I am a girl SIMP: !!!!!! Villain-1: that's right, bow to me simp SIMP: yes my queen repeat that a few times, simp becomes strongest SIMP: I AM THE STRONGEST!!!! Girl-2: *runs and hugs the simp* SIMP: *gasp* MY LOVE!?!?!?!?!? WHERE WERE YOU ALL MY LIFE??? Girl-2: my love, i am so weak SIMP: here take all of my equipment, here i captured some enemies for you to 1 shot and get exp Girl-2: simp you are mine now SIMP: yes love, I will obey you

I'm starting to love this novel you can feel the sanity of the main character and what makes him human slowly drifting away it’s a great experience and I hope other people find this novel and support it.

This is a paraphrased transcription of the novel: Simp: DIE VILLAIN Female Villain: I AM A GIRL SIMP! Simp: Sorry m' lady, please continue to plot against me FVillain: that's right simp, simp for me Simp: DIE VILLAIN! ONE MORE SHOT TO KILL YOU FVillain2: WAIT SIMP! THAT MAN BELONGS TO ME, SAVE HIM Simp: YES M' Lady even though he tried to kill me i will save him Girl1: Simp you are the strongest around here, protect me! Simp: YES M LADY!!!! Girl1: I am weak simp...what will you do Simp: TAKE EVERYTHING M' LADY TAKE IT ALL I LOVE YOU Girl1: Simp you are going west? I am going east Simp: I WILL GO EAST MY LOVE

o personagem principal faz qualquer coisa por sua mulher, ele vê mulher e enlouquece, larga tudo, é francamente nojento, mas eu sempre faço uma revisão justa, isso não é tão bom

Why are the good novels being dropped?😔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔😔. It was jus getting good too.

ఈ రచయిత చెడ్డ వార్తలను బాగా తీసుకోడు, అతను జాత్యహంకారుడు మరియు ఇక్కడ కూడా మనకు అలాంటి జాత్యహంకారం లేదు, ఇంగ్లీష్ ఏమి చెబుతుందో నాకు తెలియదు కాని ఈ నవల బాగా నిర్మించబడలేదు, ఇది ప్లాట్‌లోని రంధ్రాలతో పేలవంగా రూపొందించబడింది, ఇది సిగ్గుచేటు పాత్ర బాగాలేదు

Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand. The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man. The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays. Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.

A masterstroke of what can be considered an example of a novel that's laced with homophobic undertones. It follows the journey of a boy who fears and rejects male friendship and touch to become a ruthless killer but yearns for female love and attention so much so that he will show great mercy and compassion to them even if they want him dead. While he ruthlessly kills males and males are shown to be violent creatures, the main character hands himself and everything he owns over to a female who can offer him nothing and he does this for just a hug and a smile. One hug, one smile and all his strength (as he is the strongest among them) and everything he owns is given to the female. Noah continues to shun any kind of male interactions lest he be judged for having a "boyfriend". There is a deep message of discrimination in this novel and it tries to go the path of a simp to show where its taste lies.