Review Detail of Nukame17 in Becoming a Monster

Thank you for the review! I really enjoy writing and reading character development so I’m estatic to hear this. I’m not sure how other writers on here update so much, but I’ll be continuing on trying to put out as much chapters as I can.

hey author doesn't it feel like u need to write something more about your story in synopsis

harem? lemons?

For the love of God, no harems, please!

but I would love a good slow burn legit love interest 👻

Hoping for this to be non harem since I'm liking this already hahahaha

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE explain to me why the one of author's alt Sith_Cloud is going around being an aggressive homophobe? His alt account which he basically flat out admins to only reviews and comments against readers posts "boyfriend" like the ultimate insult and misuses the word simp over and over, this toxic attitude is disgusting.

it's amazing that we can find a novel pushing a homophobic agenda in 2022, i'm glad this is already trending, this novel should be removed, disgusting, author attacking people with homophobic comments

It's amazing how pressed you are. you aren't changing his opinion, you can just not read the book and move on, but of course you have to start a drama. I mean, isn't that all Pride is there for? I'm not against anything related to LGBTQ other than the fact that people like you tend to start unnecessary drama

I don't really appreciate the "people like you" comment but for your first part, I am really angry and I have read it and don't plan to continue reading. The author could have gracefully stepped down but he attacked his reader who posted screenshots online of their conversation, the blatant alts and everything, it was a good story but I just get really upset that someone has to use "boyfriend" as an insult...I mean really...women can have girlfriends, men can have boyfriends. I know I won't change his opinion, I'm just upset, I apologize if my drama as you say upsets you, that's not the intention, my emotions get the best of me

But even the conversation itself is a complete mess, why even become a writer, might as well make a word doc and save it somewhere no one can see

It's actually fine, doesn't upset me too much. The only thing was that I'm just kind of annoyed at seeing arguments like this everywhere, i understand that you have to defend yourself but sometimes it just gets out of the hand and just becomes an annoying block of text to look at

I get that, I'm done and I apologize, I did my part serving my little justice and saying my piece for the community. The novel was good but like the reviews are saying, the dude is literally a simp, he turns on a dime, almost complete character change when meeting that girl, we had a great idea of his character (though it got real sketch when saving the first girl) but then he flips, serves himself on a platter and all the character growth, everything we came to understand about him is made null and it makes no sense why he left those dudes alive either since it's not in line with what he's done, too forced.

I haven't even read it lol, and I'm not planning to either

I mean if he becomes a monster proper he needs women for all the kinds of reproduction! Eggs, birth, asexual spliting of self, xenomorph style...

My thoughts are more to drop off everyone at the military base and praent a ultimatum to this girl become stronger with tools and find me and if not you are not worthy also if you could convert from ratios to stat multipliers such as 1:1.5 to instead a *1 bonus it's a *1.5 bonus to a stat and such also more world perspectives and building would be nice and what is the goal of our Mc because he seems lost and needs a goal for what he does not just survive take for example Revered Insanity he is ruthless like our mc but only if it benefits him What I am suggesting that either he distances himself from society or he starts manipulating them to his goal of Eternity for only when you cannot die then you can enjoy the wonders of the universe and life.

Honestly really agree with the whole people like you. most people see something that goes against there beliefs just keep scrolling or find something else to look at and read. It would be like me finding out the main character in a book was gay and i raged about it not being a straight person instead of just finding something more in my lane. it's people like you who ruin things for others without even trying just by going after one homophobic person like it's really going to change them or guide people to support what you do. it's people like you who make me regret supporting pride in any form. just like how a handful of people give bikers a bad name, people like you give the pride community a bad name of being the equivalency of a race biter but with sexual preferences. there I spoke my mind.