Review Detail of HaracasAye in Becoming a Monster

Writing is okay, there are some areas where grammar is lacking making it hard to understand. The setting is your generic apocalypse scenario, system and all. The story is wierd, and I cant decide if its fast or slow paced. Each chapter has action and conflict but is somehow takes ages to resolve. Eg chapters 10 thru 17 are spent on a single conflict and with the length of the chapters thats alot of words for what amounts to taming a spider and fighting one man. The mc is disappointing. At the very least I expect the author to keep their mcs personality and decisions consistent with their purported backstory but I guess thats too much to ask here. Tldr. He's a rich kid that spent his life living up to his parents expectations. He has no friends, he's bullied blah blah, u know the usual edgy template we see everywhere nowadays. Problem is as soon as the apocalypse starts, he goes full sociopath. I mean cmon at least show some disgust or emotion after you bash your roomates head in other than catharsis. His subsequent interactions with individuals and internal monolouge come off as hasty, compulsive, comedic, whimsical even. This is not how someone shunned by society acts in any scenario. Of course, when the plot calls for it, he will magically start exhibiting traits and thoughts owing to his absuive upbringing if only to skew the story in a particular direction.