Ryden Holk
The only reason I got through 40 chapters of this is because I have low standards when it comes to beast taming stories, so I’ll read almost anything. I would say it’s an average story at best. It’s very predictable if you’ve read other system stories or beast taming stories. If anything, I felt like the number targets for the system were pretty unrealistic. The translation is bad. Aside from grammar and spelling errors here and there, the translation is just sloppy. Although, there do seem to be less mistakes in the latter half of the 40 chapters.
I go 6 chapters and I already saw too many cliches, the protagonist from chapter 1 thinks he is special because he is a transmigrant and he thinks that he can only have strange things and the others do not. The idea of merging with pets as armor seemed interesting to me but the protagonist is so boring and the story has so many cliches that I prefer to abandon it and wait for someone who creates a better version, because these stories always come out 1 or 2.
It's a novel that follows the typical tropes, none of the characters have any significant intelligence and they all act the way you expect them to act. If you're able to turn your brain off while reading this you'll probably enjoy it. Otherwise, if you're like me who has read these tropes to death it's boring and predictable.
I enjoyed the story despite the numerous translation problems. The largest editing problem is a duplicate of chapter 11 in the spot of chapter 12. They don't seem to have skipped a chapter, but this means chapter 20 is actually chapter 19. If someone is excessively annoyed by inaccurate descriptions being refuted two sentences later, they shouldn't read this.
This novel is unbelievably bad so domind trying it, the high rating is just so stupid because if there is a prize for cliches, this novel will take it. Prideful young masters, everyone hates mc just because he exists, they respect him when he slaps their face, and mc just keep on staying in his trash school and make them gain fame while he can leave
It’s basically 'The Charm of Soul Pets', but without a story. The pets were switched for the nearest thing (moon fox -> moon wolf), the hardwork for a system and everything in general is worse : the translation, the stakes, the world building, the size, etc… To give you an example, in TCoSP, the MC will die if he doesn’t get strong enough. In this story: no university… That’s not exactly on the same level. You can apply this comparison to everything in general. Now, I give it a fairly bad review, but it is still redeable. I’d rather recommend you 'The Charm of Soul Pets', 'Astral Pet Store' or 'Museum of Deadly Beasts' over this, but if you’ve already read them and aren’t into rereading stories like me you can go for it. It’s more of a low priority read than a no-read. Imma continue but I probably won’t finish it.
If the author of this novel was 12 years or younger: Great concept! You are an intelligent young author with good ideas. Please develop your writing and let us enjoi your works in the future. If the author is older... at least 16 or more.... ARG!!! Usually I like this kind of story - Beast-Taming, getting Stronger, a system for adds. However, in this story it is presented so plainly and... arg! -First of all, the language, even if machine-translated, is kindergarden-level. -Szene-Descriptions are awfull in their composition, especially the fights. - I am only at chapter 14 or so, but the plot is jumping and jumping ahead, with sequenses and szenes other novels would make 3-12 chapters for AT LEAST, which here are implemented, rushed down and... not usefull at all. - Power-jumping is the next thing. Just a few sentences ago something was explained to only work at higher level, MC does it earlier... with no explenation for HOW! It was just neccessary - NOT! - Dumb characters, which are so 2D, that I fear they could degrade to 1D with a little less care... - The resoning of the MC and the characters is another thing and... "Ah, he is doing somthing dangerours... but he is MC... he says he wants to do it... how could I forbid it, even thought I am responssible for his safety?" WHAT KIND OF LOGIC LEVEL IS THAT???? ARg! I m frustrated, because the idea behind the story seemed good and interesting, but - I am not sure if that is TOO hard - the author makes nearly EVERY mistake an author can make in the development at the beginning AND seems not to care about his own naming of techniques, at all.. Sorry, I am frustrated....
I’ve read up to Ch. 64 then dropped it. I’d say the first 40 chapters are a good read but it just drops in quality, for both translation and plot. The pacing became horrible and it started to drag. The translation became more inconsistent and new terms are added as if it’s being retconned as the story goes. Suddenly, things made less and less sense. Everything became convoluted and it’s hard to see where it’s going. Not in a ooh-I-wonder-what’s-gonna-happen-next way, but in a idk-what’s-going-on-anymore kind of way. 10/10 would not recommend.