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Nimblegalaxy

Nimblegalaxy

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2019-07-01 JoinedIndia
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    is this book dropped then

    Ch 214 The Blind Bazaar
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    Strongest Businessman of the Cultivation World
    Eastern · Wise_Weed
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Replied to Done_With_It

    i would like to add one more thing please develop mc's dungeon as it is a story about a dungeon master. if you need some inspiration about that then there is the novel " dungeon without a system" on a royal road it had 40 chaps last I checked might give you direction for the dungeon.

    "Jesus that's a tall tree," Jonathan whispered as he craned his neck to look up.
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    The Dungeon Master System
    Fantasy · Done_With_It
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    I thought there was different religion given that gods are different there in chapter 1

    "Jesus that's a tall tree," Jonathan whispered as he craned his neck to look up.
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    The Dungeon Master System
    Fantasy · Done_With_It
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    I think that author should start to develop a dungeon like a dungeon in a fantasy story. given the story title content till now is starting to deviate far too much

    Ch 36 Part 34
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    The Dungeon Master System
    Fantasy · Done_With_It
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Replied to Done_With_It

    here aros stated himself has "c rank enemy" which sounds a bit weird in that place he could have said dragonling , beast etc, "enemy" just doesn't fit here.

    Ch 20 Part 18
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    The Dungeon Master System
    Fantasy · Done_With_It
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    just my thought isn't using dungeon monster or even monster is a better term than enemy for "beings of the dungeon"

    Ch 12 Part 10
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    The Dungeon Master System
    Fantasy · Done_With_It
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    although I liked the concept of the story I would like to mention a few points 1. story Is progressing very fast-paced in the development of modern techs without much reference to how mc developed it( even though he doesn't have much of a cheat other than the memory of a world in form of a dream). 2. I am getting that you are trying to make a villain of that anti magic faction but they are creating trouble when MC is a non-magic person is not getting to me. 3. I still don't have a proper image of your world in 9 chaps. 4. I think you should read "i-m-the-king-of-technology" just for reference.

    Ch 9 Interrogation: Part 2
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    The Mechanical Era
    Fantasy · MaxLostchild
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Replied to EternalAngel

    https://comrademao.com/novel/legendary-pet-shop/

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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    twice or half

    However, even the cheapest car wasn't something Seth could afford. Going from 19 districts to a total of 11 districts, Paris had been reduced by almost twice its original size due to the monster threat.
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    Gene Era: Breath of Evolution
    Fantasy · YoanRoturier
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Replied to DillonCS

    yeah, most of the monster invasion or apocalypse novels turned out to be in similar formate. out of all, I have read only Worlds' Apocalypse Online is the one I slightly liked compared to the other.

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    I Can Enhance My Talents Using Unlimited Skill Points
    Sci-fi · Dreamscape Superman
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Commented

    rank(tank)?

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    I'm the King Of Technology
    Fantasy · lumydee
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Replied to Nimblegalaxy

    I also missed the word in 3rd point I was writing that " I understand that MC was not some kind of genius on earth"

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    I Can Make Everything Level UP
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Posted

    this is one of the best reincarnation novels I have read on webnovel. story development is good, characters design is also good, harem doesn't appear to be forced, MC is also not thinking with his lower body, MC is not a slave of the system, etc. while the story is good there are a few points desired in the story according to me 1. first is there are too many grammatical errors, sometimes spelling mistakes, sometimes name changes. So I think the author should take a few days' break and correct those mistakes as it will hurt him in the long run 2. MC is severely underusing his system. while the title of the novel is "I Can Make Everything Level UP" MC is not using his system to level things up ( or at least it appears to like that in the novel). 3. MC is not using his modern knowledge enough, I can understand MC was some king of genius on earth but he should be able to copy some simple things from earth. (the only thing I have seen him make is a crossbow but even that is after he saw someone else using it)( till chap 230 at the very least)

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    I Can Make Everything Level UP
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy1yr
    Posted

    this novel is full of cliche moments, face slapping and dangerous levels of nationalism and racism. I have read it till 200 chaps on MTL finally I couldn't tolerate that level of racism and had to stop reading it

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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Commented

    you changed the dino from t rex to carnotour ( I don't know why you used modern dino names in the first place, could have used any names )

    Lobion doesn't want to be in the same position as the first time against the carnotaur. That dinosaur forced him and his father to separate! Even today, he still doesn't know if his father managed to escape from the carnotaur or not!
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    The hidden world beneath Dinosaur Island
    Fantasy · Arsthe_Creation
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Posted

    after a long time somewhat decent novel based on animal taming. it is good for the first 25 chaps. just a few fear though "excessive nationalism" and "racism" as it is based on the modern setting.

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    Making Pets A Worldwide Phenomenon
    Urban · Ooty
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Replied to THE_WORDSMITH

    well then one-sided crush

    Ch 32 Moving On.
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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Commented

    first time seeing so fast broken romance

    Ch 32 Moving On.
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    Ace Of Terrans
    Sci-fi · THE_WORDSMITH
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Posted

    not the best one I have read but definitely better than the most. but it still has only 40 chaps so it's hard to judge it completely still worth my time tp read this

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    I Am Not The Machine King
    Sci-fi · Sinful Snowflakes
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  • Nimblegalaxy
    Nimblegalaxy2yr
    Commented

    sorry for the comment in the earlier chapter while the theme was the similar ,story is different and again sorry for the earlier comment

    Ch 3 An invasion
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    Dungeons Online
    Games · MotivatedSloth
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