LuoYeYouLing
Shamelessly giving myself 5* here. Please review and/or vote with your spirit stones if you like the story. Hello people! This is Luo Ye, the author of Be My Strength. I am doing my best to post at least 8-10 chapters a week. Due to my weakness in grammar, I am currently working with a friend who is helping me with the proofreading. However, since none of us are professionals, we might miss out something during the proofreading / editing process. Please don't hesitate to let us know if you found any mistakes. Yours, Luo Ye
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I usually donβt read romance novels, but this actually hooked me in. The grammar is good, and thereβs are no glaring mistakes that I have found while reading. When it comes to the style, then Iβd say the paragraphs are a bit chunky. You should try making them smaller so the readers are not overwhelmed by walls of text. I donβt mind slow paced stories, but thereβs should be an event that I look forward to, maybe some kind of foreshadowing. (If I had rom give an example - Cultivation chat group is very slow paced, and it starts with nothing happening to the mc, but I keep reading it because I want to find out how he joins the chat.) The story and the character story are very good. I find myself caught into the world after reading only chapter one. The characters have personalities and a background, which makes them 3d. Overall, this story is one worth to look at, if theyβd are interested in romance and the like. Itβs honestly really interesting, if one makes it past those small mistakes,
Dear author I usually give 5 * to all original novels, it's hard for you authors to write and work at the same time, one must be really into writing to do so, but with your novel it's a shame I can't give you more ... 6* or 7*. I love it so much. I'm not fond of romance novels and usually use this platform to improve my English so I pick up novles randomly, yours was one of this random picks. Lucky me ππππ. The plot is well developed, the main characters are complicated of course, like people use to be in real life. The pace is not very fast and better not, because the story needs time to develope, there is so much background... what I like the most is that from the beginning the relationship between the main characters is there, but you give us clues about their past, how they met and how they work out their relationship, on plus the female character is strong and seeks revenge.... what more can I ask FOR???? Anyways, don't mind your grammar, you have some problems but not big ones. Just one wish.... don't make the story too long. Great job. I have already recommended this nove to my friends.
I started reading this novel after viewing some interesting reviews about the story.But when i start reading it I m totally disappointed that I thought I had wasted my time reading it.To be honest I didn't like the initial chapters and thought about stop reading it,I don't know why but I kept reading it.And now I m glad that I continued to read,it's just toooo good with a lot of suspense,revenge,brotherhood, children's fight and fun,friendship,power of love,money,mind and status.I m that addicted to reading it that I completed reading it within just two days ,cause I can't stop myself from knowing what's next to come.....
All I can say is it's worth it. Worth your time, worth your spirit stones, worth your power stones. It's the best novel I have come across so far and I have read quite a few good ones. The author is really invested in making the story as realistic as possible. It makes you realise that everything we think we need or want may not be as ideal as we imagine it to be. There are a few grammatical errors, which is a pet peeve of mine, but the story is too good to leave just because of those few grammatical errors.
The story is very addicting..πππ The more i read, more i wanna know about all the secretes and stories of each character. Emotions are depicted so vividly and beautifully.... Seriously, its a must read..!!!!!!!!!!!! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Wooooww one of the best work I have read.......I just love it so muchhhh.....β€β€β€β€ I am going to miss it as it has come to an end but seriously it was a new story that shows all emotions in a much beautiful way.... I would recommend it to all the serious readers who like me are searching for something new and refreshing..... The way in which author had depicted homosexuality is also beautiful and nothing vulgar or nonsense is there...... I am looking forward to other work by our dearest author..... I LOVE YOU FOR YOUR GREAT WORK......β€β€β€β€
A rarity page turner from the very beginning to the very end! No cap! This novel was written beautifully and it really gets you in your feelings as if you're part of the story! It's EVERYTHING PERIODT! Check it out you'll see what I mean! So many twists and turns, its a thrill to read. The side stories are the best as well and they all blend beautifully with the main story. I hope this review encourages you to read the novel plus anyone know who can I talk to to turn this into a series???? I would love to see this novel as a drama!
I loved this book the first time I read it. I have read it again and still loved the story and almost all the characters in it. Author did a good job with this book and made we the readers identify with the characters as possible things that happen around us today as compared to fictions we can't believe can happen. Well done Author