Review Detail of ImBloo in Be My Strength

Item: Be My Strength
Rating: 4

Review detail

ImBlooLv55yrImBloo

Your writing seems very polished. Typos and grammar errors are rare. The sentences flow nicely. The contents leave something to be desired, though. The synopsis implies some sort of conflict, but as of chap 8 it's still not clear to me. Who's IX trying to take revenge on?

Be My Strength

LuoYeYouLing

Liked by 7 people

Replies3

LuoYeYouLingAuthorLuoYeYouLing

Thanks for leaving a review. I cannot answer your question yet but her enemies will show up eventually. In your opinion, would it be better for me to divulge the identity of the enemy early on or leave it until the end?

5yr

ImBlooLv5ImBloo

Well I'm more familiar with the traditional story telling format: introduce the hero and the villain first, introduce the conflict, then let the conflict play out. But if you are trying something new, I'm not the best person to ask.

5yr

ShenoranLv11Shenoran

Naturally, it is best not to reveal everything at once. Which lets us readers have something to ponder about, or maybe that's just my thinking.

LuoYeYouLing:Thanks for leaving a review. I cannot answer your question yet but her enemies will show up eventually. In your opinion, would it be better for me to divulge the identity of the enemy early on or leave it until the end?

5yr