Review Detail of Hyowha in Be My Strength

I usually don’t read romance novels, but this actually hooked me in. The grammar is good, and there’s are no glaring mistakes that I have found while reading. When it comes to the style, then I’d say the paragraphs are a bit chunky. You should try making them smaller so the readers are not overwhelmed by walls of text. I don’t mind slow paced stories, but there’s should be an event that I look forward to, maybe some kind of foreshadowing. (If I had rom give an example - Cultivation chat group is very slow paced, and it starts with nothing happening to the mc, but I keep reading it because I want to find out how he joins the chat.) The story and the character story are very good. I find myself caught into the world after reading only chapter one. The characters have personalities and a background, which makes them 3d. Overall, this story is one worth to look at, if they’d are interested in romance and the like. It’s honestly really interesting, if one makes it past those small mistakes,