Dear author I usually give 5 * to all original novels, it's hard for you authors to write and work at the same time, one must be really into writing to do so, but with your novel it's a shame I can't give you more ... 6* or 7*. I love it so much. I'm not fond of romance novels and usually use this platform to improve my English so I pick up novles randomly, yours was one of this random picks. Lucky me 😊😊😊😊. The plot is well developed, the main characters are complicated of course, like people use to be in real life. The pace is not very fast and better not, because the story needs time to develope, there is so much background... what I like the most is that from the beginning the relationship between the main characters is there, but you give us clues about their past, how they met and how they work out their relationship, on plus the female character is strong and seeks revenge.... what more can I ask FOR???? Anyways, don't mind your grammar, you have some problems but not big ones. Just one wish.... don't make the story too long. Great job. I have already recommended this nove to my friends.
LuoYeYouLing
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LIKEBeneGesserit:So this is the story you recommend me ???? I'll give it a try thanks
Oh my! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw your review after coming out from a long meeting. A great review like yours can make an author's day brighter. Truth be told, I was a little down because of work but when I saw this, I immediately found the energy to write two chapters. I'm glad that you like the storyline and I hope that I would still see you around until the end of the novel... ** : There are still many MANY secrets that are not out yet. <3 LuoYeYouLing
Dear author of course I'm going to be with you utill the end, your novel is worth it, I'll use my ss and purchase more if necessary. I'm witing for more secrets to come and always craving for more chapters... thanks so much.
LuoYeYouLing:Oh my! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw your review after coming out from a long meeting. A great review like yours can make an author's day brighter. Truth be told, I was a little down because of work but when I saw this, I immediately found the energy to write two chapters. I'm glad that you like the storyline and I hope that I would still see you around until the end of the novel... ** : There are still many MANY secrets that are not out yet. <3 LuoYeYouLing