Asura's Path In Douluo Dalu

A young man got his revenge but also a second chance at life to live a life free of burdens! I am new to writing and would love to hear everyone's advice/tips or wishes! Updates: 4 per week / 7 Max Disclaimer: I don't own the Novel/Manga Doulou Dalu aka. Soul Land. Its an amazing series so if you have the time now, you should read it! (I don't own the Cover either i just found it on the internet and thought it was kind of similiar to the MC i was trying to display but the MC is a bit more buffed and red eyes)