One of the few fanfics I find very enjoyable on this side. Most other fanfics are either not researched enough, so the author has no idea what he is talking about. Or the MC is just another side character following the original protagonist, or killing him and following canon. There is little creativity in most of these stories as most of the plot is just focused on getting any and all girls while becoming too strong even if it doesn‘t make sense, while you sre basically dying from all the ‚cringe‘ while reading it. Don‘t get me wrong, I love OP MC‘s and a good romance. But a forced plot and an abused plot armor are things I can‘t stand. Luckily, the author of this fanfiction is trying really hard to avoid this, and it shows! The story flows nicely without a forced feeling, while the MC is a risktaker while keeping within reasonable bounds. He knows when to take a leap of faith and when something is worth risking his live for. He acts with a maturity that fits his actual age, not the age of his new body, which I greatly appreciate! He is obviously very powerful, but he isn‘t conplacent and doesn‘t really care about showing off. He just wants strength to be free to live carefree and adenture into the world. He doesn‘t really care about the canon and just searches for his own path to strength. The romance is very good, even though lacks a little depth, but nothing really serious. It is the first time the author writes these scences and he does it fantastically considering this. There is no real rushed feelings as the author tries to make the interactions as smooth as possible, which succedes most of the time. No unreasonable changes in the bahaviours of the original characters, but a well-thought out development which results in slowly blossoming feelings. The MC isn‘t some s*x-starved virgin that just wants to vents his lust and has no idea what love really means. He shows expierience and maturity when dealing with the fairer gender, and does so in an appropiate way considering the situation(age, location, etc.). All in all, I hope this story will continue and I am looking forward to where this story goes. Especialls since the author shows a clear willingness to improve and handles constructive critisism wonderfully :) Thank you for the story you have written so far 🤗
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Thanks. Just what I wanted to know.
No problem. I seldom write reviews, as I don‘t like to waste my time with stories I dropped or are discontinued. But this one I really enjoy, so I just had to give the author this review ;)
Me too. Always searching for hidden gems, sadly they are aptly named, as they are hard to find. 🤗
