Reviews of Astral Odyssey: Dying Ember

Love it so much that I followed it everywhere, and re-read it 3 times while loyaly waiting for updates. 100% recommend you to read it. The gradual build up of romance in each world combined with their relationship generally (as their souls travels to other worlds)*chefs kiss* is beautiful. the very intriguing FL who believes she can never be more than average (and can’t be convinced otherwise)—its a nice Difference from the usual “naive, weak or OP” FL— I can reLate with the insicurities and thoughts. her development, her growth is nothing short of intricate and well thought of {good job author}. The ML is just basically the reader sometimes: Yes! we can see her; Yes! She is cute; and yes! We love her effort. Both their struggles are so interesting you haVe to keep reading. lastly, can’t forget the ever so cute AI system that learned so much that its now just the same as a human child. I applaude you @fluffyfluffpuff *standing ovation[img=update]

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(First review ever) Yall this book brought my to tears!! My hearT was all gooey one moment and suffacating the next. ive re-read this so manY times. i truly love it the characters they are super amAzing. i really like how ML devel** As well as the MC. cute. fluffY. tragic. funny.

I don’t really write reviews or rate books often but for the few that I do it’s because I find the book really fun to read, the plot of the book is interesting and enjoyable to read. So, the overall plot is great, the world development’s are good too. There isn’t any major problems from my perspective.

have been following this story from wattpad then figured it was moved to webnovel , reasons why I'm on the app, I have loved each world and still waiting for more updates. can't wait to know what would happen when she finally goes back to her original world. lots of love from this side author 🤗

Hola! I'm glad to see your Odyssey is still going strong and I'm highly enjoying the beast world too. Of all the system stories I've read, yours is the 1st one to do so and do it well! I can't help but wonder if that Evergreen wolf our girl met at the mating ground will make a reappearance. Or when the disappointing ML wolf will show up and if our FL will be content to be treated like a doormat or not. Anyhoo.. please write more soon!

I absolutely LOVE this book. The way the author seamlessly weaves in the different worlds which in turn drives character development is absolutely captivating. I started this book a year ago and never forgot about it, even when the author took breaks in between posting chapters I have waited with bated breath! Pretty much 90% of the reason Im even still on this app!

This book is a work of art and not cliche at all. The characters don’t just meet and BAM they fall in love. There is development as they progress through each world. The pace is just right and rather realistic. Every world also appears to have a lesson to teach about self-love and growth.

Read the first book on Wattpad and absolutely loved it