Reviews of Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group
Anime Multiverse Dimensional Chat Group
UltimateSenpai
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- Character Design
- world background
alright, gonna say to all of you, readers. Thanks for your patience as I rewrite this novel from the first chapter. I believe the grammar was too awful to read, so I decided to rewrite it at that time. although I'm not sure how my grammar currently is, I already tried my best, and I hope you like it. I made a lot of changes in interactions and deleted an arc that was supposed to be after the Konosuba arc. I also added more words per chapter. 1400-2000. ah, let me remind you, the plot is basically the same as the previous one. anyway sorry for the inconvenience, and thank you for still willing to wait for the new chapters to come.
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My name is Yoshikage Kira. I'm 33 years old. My house is in the northeast section of Morioh, where all the villas are, and I am not married. I work as an employee for the Kame Yu department stores, and I get home every day by 8 PM at the latest. I don't smoke, but I occasionally drink. I'm in bed by 11 PM, and make sure I get eight hours of sleep, no matter what. After having a glass of warm milk and doing about twenty minutes of stretches before going to bed, I usually have no problems sleeping until morning. Just like a baby, I wake up without any fatigue or stress in the morning. I was told there were no issues at my last check-up. I'm trying to explain that I'm a person who wishes to live a very quiet life. I take care not to trouble myself with any enemies, like winning and losing, that would cause me to lose sleep at night. That is how I deal with society, and I know that is what brings me happiness. Although, if I were to fight I wouldn't lose to anyone.
Grammar is basically bad and the excuse of It's my third language doesn't really work as english is my third language too but I'm still pretty good at it. Updates come daily. I didn't really like story development as I don't like mixed anime world, In the first few chapters MC literally mocked shouya but he still continued to be polite and even became MC's friend? No way that I would become a friend of someone who started mocking my several seconds after we met. Character design is subpar for some characters while others are so-so, Example: Shouya would get angry straight away if someone called him short, Kakashi wouldn't be so calm afterall there's no such thing as smartphone in his time, he wouldn't be able to write straight away either. World background is a mess (Mainly because of many different world mixed in), but acceptable I guess.
The story was very weird at first, but it get better after first mission. The plot is nice and unique. Different from the other novel with similiar theme, this one does have a lot of potential. And from the description in chapter 0, there will be a mission with the ability being restricted. It's good enough, so the one who take the mission won't be so op. Chest reward is good and there's percentage of the reward being dropped which is according to power and rarity. Not only dropping ability, skill, or item from anime, it also from games which is bit interesting. Don't be a stupid guy lije there who gave this novel 1 star because he didn't like the MC reveal himself being reincarnated person
I was super excited at seeing a multidimensional chat group, but immediately disappointed as this is almost an exact copy of akikan40's work. I was hoping for something that could make this stand out on its own and I understand since inspiration was obtained from that story, but inspiration and mimicry are two different things. I'm sorry to say that I can't give this very good rating for its poor grammar, story design (originality), the development (because again it is an imitation instead of an entirely new creation), the world background hasn't even changed much at all even with trying to use a different "start point" with a new Manga. Overall can't continue with this story in good conscious as I see it as a waste of time. Think of it like re-reading Frankenstein, you know what's going to happen, you've read the story before, it didn't change, why should you care more about it now reading it the second time?
Currently on chapter 60 of the rewrite. The original's romance with Hori-san makes sense, he has low self esteem, is lonely, was bullied and in the end found her who "accepts" him. But here, he's not like that at all, and we only see a Hori-san who is jealous, she doesn't want him to stop being "dark", show his pretty face to others and stand out, at the same time she doesn't want others to find out that she knows someone so "dark" and it's very possessive. In the end it's just a toxic relationship.
Akikan Dimensional group chat 2.0 The system is better. but MC is bland, cringe and wants to get stronger with no purpose. The group chap interactions aren't very interesting and just there as attraction and none of the quirks of their personality more like puppets maybe. I read only 1-14 and couldn't continue wasting my time. There's a load of problems I just wanna say, but nah.
Saran: 1. Semua mudah percaya siapa aja. apalagi kakashi yg dari muridnya sendiri aja dia menutup diri apalagi org asing dan teknologi yg gak dia kenal dan klo gw Kakashi pasti gw gak bakal ikut ide MC dan mikir ngalu ni orang. 2. power system. Power system nyampur, gak stabil. lu bisa ambil sedikit ide dari Innihilation Maker. 3 emotional complex. harusnya lu bikin emosi lebih manusiawi. gak kaku.
