He fought existence like bloaters and survive without coma and yet tiger make him in a coma for 2 days? did the tiger become a larger boss than bloater?

now youre just exaggerating. Tiger dodging bullets? thats pretty stupid. 4 chapters just to fight animals 😐😐 and a lot of soldiers died for it.....

I know that you stole the idea and some of the chapters from chinese fanfiction...ive read that book but its a pity its hiatus for a long time. But i guess it would be nice if you continue the book cause it was greatThis is the chinese fanfic that resembles this book : 我来改变行尸走肉世界

I don't know why but MC is so lustful and dominering, such hypocrite (poor sanji)....he grab all the heroines that it makes me sick....and he feels and act like hes the captain...always be the one who decides things. He KILLED every major enemy that are very crucial for the future One Piece ( croc, Mr.2, Mr.3, Bucky(half dead), etc) We literally wont see amazing future story without those people around.... This should be chinese fanfic, because most of MC's character personalities are those kind of characters build by chinese

why you never thought of raising the tempeeature rather than control? what makes you think that fire temperature is fixed?

to tell you the truth, the you choose a good quirk and all but i think this story lacks color and background, i think because the story only use 1st Person view. I think it would be great if you use 3rd person view more often, like others people's conversations (like a different POV other than MC) overall its good

You should know the Author's record of novel before read this novel. The author is known for its incomplete, short , and rewriteable novel. This book might have a potential, but its just a potential if Author don't stay true to it/ dropped just like the others novel.

Hmmm...I was waiting for the previous novel and then i found out the novel was changed. I really can't stand how you always gave me false hope of continuing your previous chapter and waste my stone on you just to know that you rewrite it completely. If you always do this to every single of your stories, your book fans would be disappointed. Just an advice. No offense, after all i really like this novel's previous story.

Sorry but im out. Can't stand the MC. Its okay to be cold blooded, but MC really dont care about human lives and kill them and still blame them cause they are weak.

i dont think the author will finish it. 100% sure

i saw this thing in real life....not that rare. you can buy it online

Its a pity good story like this ended up destroying my mood because of the strong NTR (Tenka's case). If Yoshino is a bad and abusive guy then im cool with it..but he is a loyal and loving husband who sucumbed to fate that bitch lilith made. The whole scenario just leave a very bad taste to the point that i dont want to read anymore...BUT maybe my taste will change and continue to read it again. Anyway other than a very bad NTR everything is good[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Will smith is considered as a black dude too, but he is not as black as Chadwick boseman...thats why i think MC is okay. So why do you considered MC as WHITE?? I can't understand your logic and dedinition of white. Or do tou think Wakanda should be as black as midnight?

Can't you even tell the difference between brown and WHITE??...GET HELP!

WOW...you are so smart to think that Ozymandias's appereance is WHITE....im utterly speechless by your definition of white...[img=recommend][img=recommend]lol[img=recommend][img=recommend]

The story is far better than the Author's other fanfic. But i bet The Àuthor will make other new fanfic and abandon this one, just like other fanfic

can you continue your Mushoku Impact? for me, its the best Mushoku Tensei fanfic ever [img=recommend][img=recommend]

This chapter feels wrong to me...i mean playing orgies with dozens people???

This fanfic is barely 23 and yet you want to create another one?

What i dont like about this fic is why Gilgamesh always took so long defeating enemies..like Arthur, sun wukong, hooded man whose strength are just below Super maou even though he can defeat Sirzechs who is Super devil whose at the top 10 strongest .... I think the fight is stupid because Gilgamesh didnt take out all of his power like rinnegan, or Verethragna speed or Silverarm....the enemy just got away easily and thats just piss me off