Reviews of Allen Walker in DxD [Highschool dxd Fan-fiction]

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Really interesting way to put those characters together in to the DXD world you got me hook in few chapters. Hope to see more in the future.

think you should make it he absolutely destroys him never liked riser and make risers sister join allen! grayfia should stay with her brother it is his wife after all i think but its up to you

Its an ok story but all the writing is kimda forced and the acrual thing doesnt flow like others also u dont have to constantly write about how they are expressing their speechs It gets extremly repetitive for example So and so said blah blah happily So and so said blah blah excitedly It just ruins the speech so pls refrain from doin this.

Great story dude hope u update it daily this suspense is killing me alllll tttthheeeee beeeessssstttt dudeeee and hope u can write it continuisly and not drop it like the other authors do , have put on a lot of Hope in you dude don't disappoint dude

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It's amazing, tank you....................................................................................................................................................................

GOOD STORY WITH BEING UNIQUE..................................................................... HAVING ALLEN IN DXD IS TONTALLY NEW........................................................ GOOD JOB AUTHOR-SAN :-)....................................................................................

Overall : not bad/good ........................................................................................................................................................................................

Allen Walker is one of the best mc of all time ..................................................,........................................................................................,......................................

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It's unreadable... just read a few sentences and you will see what I mean.................................................................. .......................... .. . .......

Esta bien la historia pero lo malo es que no actualiza desde hace tiempo. Eso es todoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

This novel was exceedingly difficult to follow as the chapters progressed. The combination of bad grammar, formatting, and weird flow made me lose interest.

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YOU RUIN EVERYTHIN WHEN YOU MAKE ISSEI AND KIBA GENDER-BENDER, CAN YOU NOT MAKE NORMAL STORY................................................

Good story, but it's unreadable. I suppose that English isn't the Main language of the Author but he could have read it after passing it by google trad.

Hmm .... why is the rating almost a 3.9? Why is it at 4.1 ..... I’ve seen nothing but 4 to 5 stars . I’m very confused did author delete reviews or something ?