Review Detail of Hilo in Allen Walker in DxD [Highschool dxd Fan-fiction]

Its an ok story but all the writing is kimda forced and the acrual thing doesnt flow like others also u dont have to constantly write about how they are expressing their speechs It gets extremly repetitive for example So and so said blah blah happily So and so said blah blah excitedly It just ruins the speech so pls refrain from doin this.