Saint_Grey
The start of the story was good. The author sometimes forgot to use a capital letter at the start of the character's name so I hope the author can smooth it out. Lastly I want to add is I suggest the author elaborate more on Jaewon's past missions to shape his impression as a 7-star agent more to the reader. This has the potential to be an amazing action story if it's developed well. Keep up the good work!
The author needs to rephrase statements a little to eliminate any confusion of who is saying the dialogues. Small grammar and spelling mistakes etc and some more feedback which I have left in the comments. The story was just 1 chapter now, but what the agent could do with his superpower is intriguing. Keep up the good work