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Review Detail of Kalki_gsk in Agent Silva

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The author needs to rephrase statements a little to eliminate any confusion of who is saying the dialogues. Small grammar and spelling mistakes etc and some more feedback which I have left in the comments. The story was just 1 chapter now, but what the agent could do with his superpower is intriguing. Keep up the good work

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