Keikokumars
A great war that swept all the world leaving none from its prying jaws of death... A soldier turned coward who ran away from those horrors for he has seen his loved ones, friends, war mates, his dearest all lost to the cruel war that none experienced and never expected... By a fluke he returned to past which he vowed to protect all those smiles and happiness., this is a story of war hero who's in quest to stop the great war from happening. This is a story that tells us about morality, virtue, cruelty, happiness, sad, a mixture of war and endless court machinations going across the kingdoms courts... A story of betrayal a story of hope a story of enlightenment..... Sigh...... I think I wrote a little tooo much....
Keikokumars, I have read all your stories since they were first posted on Royalroadl years ago and remember waiting day by day for updates on this story till it was eventually finished. At the time, this story was one of my favorites, if not my number one favorite, as I loved the epic tale of regret, love and more importantly one man's undying quest to conquer the demons of his past which have haunted his every waking minute. While I will be the first to admit that overall your proise and dictation can come off a little bland and at times disharmonious with the improper use of either conjugation of word choice, I deeply enjoyed the tale that you weaved. When you decided to take down both this story and Novis Gaius from Royalroadl only to post it on Amazon, while I was disappointed at the time I also understood that this was probably your way of trying to follow your dreams while making money off of it. However seeing you post this story here with little in the way of changes in either the grammer/ syntax of your sentences or in the overall plot, I must confess that I am disappointed that such a high potential story has fallen short of my hopes. I came back to read this story after years since I wanted to reminisce on one of my favorite stories on Royalroadl only to find that it was no longer even available through payment on Amazon and is still only a little more than half way done on this site. I hope that you still finish fully posting this story so that others may read and enjoy the full tale, but only wish that if you are slowly reposting this story that you take the time to edit and improve on this story as the rest has already been written before.
For NTR fans, ride the MC's wife. I read it around 2014 or 2015 and got massive ntr and his hopeless and his misery the mc who couldn't even hate his friend and could only swallow his pride and let go and pretend not to know of any. He felt that his time on battle more than on bed, so he forget and forgive his friend as long as he care his wife on bed
For everyone saying there netorare there is none for a person who originally read this years ago n royal road there is none there is a girl who vying for the affection of the main character even though he is solely devoted to his wife and so the infidelity part come from that it not large but its their netorare isn't always the hentai equivalent it just mean infidelity but it been years since I read it so I dotn remember if they actually do the deed the books is great and I enjoyed it all those years ago to bad the guy start slowing down on updates and other projects so I stopped reading it I think it was my first major reed on royal road so good luck man happy to see you bacl
Decent story. Poor grammar. While the story is engaging, the author seems to have issues with conjugation and keeping consistent with tense usage. For those who may be non-native speakers, or those that can blow past such issues, this is an interesting read. For those who might be grammatically sensitive, this is a bit of a tough read.
I haven't read this story yet. I was looking at the reviews and many people are complaining about NTR. I personally do not enjoy it so I dug a bit deeper, and I find that all the people saying so are gaslighting liars, and there is no NTR. even the top review is someone who hasn't read the story (not like I can say much) complaining about NTR. This is ridiculous. I hope this reaches the top of the reviews so people see this before all the lying.