Decent story. Poor grammar. While the story is engaging, the author seems to have issues with conjugation and keeping consistent with tense usage. For those who may be non-native speakers, or those that can blow past such issues, this is an interesting read. For those who might be grammatically sensitive, this is a bit of a tough read.
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