Review Detail of ImmortalSnowwolf in Age of Heroes ( Age of Heroes Chronicles)

Does the world design get better? Starts off terribly by referring to a dukedom without specifying if it's in a kingdom and then says the kingdom is attacked and he returns to the dukedom. Very confusing and *******ish writing with confusing references and mistakes especially with time, first chapter says he's been in the army for 1 year, 2nd says 8 hours earlier and 3rd says 6 years fighting in army?!? Does the writing get better or is it always this bad?

The first park's are a little here and there, but further along the author does a very good job with keeping times consistent along with the date at the top of the majority of chaps. He also does a great job with characters and making them feel more than just hollow side peices. I will admit there are rough spots in there, but it is worth the read and the coins.