Reviews of After training for 1,000 years, it's time for me to collect my harem
After training for 1,000 years, it's time for me to collect my harem
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the first world (of naruto) was very good, the interaction between the mc and the girls was good, not very elaborate but pleasant. However, the second world (kuroinu hentai world) was a disaster, I suppose it is a twisted fantasy of the autro (although he says that the rape is not to his liking), to give you an idea, one of the mc was raped brutally, but the author "magically" made her recover, returning to being pure, but leaving her to live with the trauma; Another thing, the mc is so weak that it is almost defeated by the protagonist of that world (seriously, a hentai protagonist ...); the author invents a plot so confused with that twisted world, there are other worlds much better to develop a plot of gods, he intends to do it in that stupid world .... He was so good in the world of naruto, but he did that stupidity. ..
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Author I really don’t like the principle of mc not using his power moves that could turn his enemy into broken soul plus, I know when there is rape expect the woman to be pregnant and I would say this bull**** those child they should die they are nothing more than just a bastard child every race should be killed I’m someone who hate rape(people who treat woman nothing more than just a monster) they don’t need to be in society even if they are force to join to make themselves degrade they could have stopped this but they let their instincts, before people dis mi out how the bastard children from rape woman , I say they are not good even if they are new it’s their parent fault I was liking this novel at when It was at the naruto verse, however when it get to the next one my god all I see is a stupid mc who don’t even torture the men who rape women nothing more than just a toy, plus what kind of mage he is where he could help people lose that trauma and even make the woman have a way to revert them rape . I’ll stop ranting now as I really hate many things n it but also like I just hope author don’t make mc someone who is forgiving person and seing a bastard child is clean .
Although I don't quite like the logic behind mc's magic power, the romance part is decent enough, unlike beta mc or power maniac mc which had been written by many authors here. Also hope that he maintains his dignity as a powerhouse and not act like a weak teenager that wound bend on his own will, be it bowing or fearing in-law or whatever.
I don't know what had happened, but seeing this fic getting deleted just made my heart felt like it was being crushed so bad. I followed the story since forever, I really hope that I can see the ending of this fic, but unfortunately it came to this. I really hope that one day you would continue.... see you in the next fic that you'll make... hopefully..
Decent start goes down from there. The story starts off in Naruto world which was doing ok. Then the next world was just shit. The problem is the MC after 1000 years is still an absolute idiot. The premise of the story, is him going to a different world and getting his harem. But the author decides to make him a total hero that would not touch another person's girlfriend. The very fact that he will go different world means he will be taking someone's women so the shit reason the Author comes up with trying to justify his action while maintaining the Heroic bullshit that he will not take another is huge plot hole and make you want to puke. In the second world, he lets rapist go one time, another time massacres them. The MC seems like a psychopath without clear reasoning. The Author and plot do everything to make him look heroic but that makes the immersion broken. I do not know why the author wants to make him into a goody-two-shoes, while he goes around collecting harem and yes NTRs people no matter how much the author tries to say otherwise. Had the Author braved it out and just not cared about the stupid rules of not touching another person's women then it would have been decent I can't take it right now. IF it does get better and the MC stops acting like a child let me know I will read ahead but the second arc is where I will stop. The best way to describe the story is there is a pros---ute who wants to be the holiest nun and at the same time hold the best prost---de trophy while getting bangged every night.
Calm novel and the interactions between the characters is fluffy at times.The MC is an alpha male and very determined and I like to see that. My only gripe with this novel would be that grammar is very inconsistent at times shattering my whole immersion in a specific scene . Nonetheless good novel dont drop it.
-NO FUCK, when I found this Fic good the author decided to delete it, what a bad fate. ................./¯/)............(\¯\ .............../¯ ./..............\. ¯\ ............./. . /................ \ . .\ ......../´¯/' . '/´¯`•¸,....,•´¯`\' . '\´¯\ ..../' /. ./ . ./ . ./¯\../¯\. . \. . \. .\ '\ ..( . ( . ( . ( ¯ ./' . ')..(' . '\. ¯ ) . ) . ) . ) ...\ . . . . . . . . . . ./...\. . . . . . . . . . ./ .....\ . . . . . . . . ./......\. . . . . . . . . / .....(. . . . . . . . . \......./. . . . . . . . . )
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