Although I don't quite like the logic behind mc's magic power, the romance part is decent enough, unlike beta mc or power maniac mc which had been written by many authors here. Also hope that he maintains his dignity as a powerhouse and not act like a weak teenager that wound bend on his own will, be it bowing or fearing in-law or whatever.
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LIKEGood, thanks for your hard work, now that he can trust mei and tenten a bit more as they were virg before mc pierce them and literally they would not betray mc for not so strong reason. If you make tsunade not virg, then i hope mc doesn't really put her in the hare m and just do a one time thing coz who knows when she will betray him coz anyone can do, even mortal who only has money. But of course i hope that you make tsunade also a v.
I'm dropping this, thanks for the journey, mc help a girl, instead of thanking him of being rescued, the girl simply said she want to check her husband's wellbeing and act as if it's mc's obligation to save her, the stupid mc just continue helping her using his xiantian strength to fight mortals without reason. Don't bother reading this again, the stupid cliche wuxiaw orld or novelup dates or ba belnovel is better than this where the protagonist there has a goal and not randomly transported to another mortal world.
'simply said' that's rather a lie don't you think? Claudia clearly said she doesn't want the MC to fight by himself, but MC rejected her offer to help, his reason is simply want to impress her, he doesn't know she has a husband. MC did all of those not to help her, but the Kuroinu has broken his bottom line, and MC simply wants to help the people that's it suffering from the war, and that's it, so read well before you get tell wrong information.
DearCompanion:I'm dropping this, thanks for the journey, mc help a girl, instead of thanking him of being rescued, the girl simply said she want to check her husband's wellbeing and act as if it's mc's obligation to save her, the stupid mc just continue helping her using his xiantian strength to fight mortals without reason. Don't bother reading this again, the stupid cliche wuxiaw orld or novelup dates or ba belnovel is better than this where the protagonist there has a goal and not randomly transported to another mortal world.
Stupid mc who save the world for nothing, he even exhaust all his mana to heal people and repair house of commoners ? Then for the reward he was only given a room to rest ? While the MIL f mortal captain he try to impress is f c king with her husband in the next room ? Really, whoever writes this just go to ........
Stupid mc who save the world for nothing, he even exhaust all his mana to heal people and repair house of commoners ? Then for the reward he was only given a room to rest ? While the MIL f mortal captain he try to impress is f c king with her husband in the next room ? Really, whoever writes this just go to ........
DearCompanion:Stupid mc who save the world for nothing, he even exhaust all his mana to heal people and repair house of commoners ? Then for the reward he was only given a room to rest ? While the MIL f mortal captain he try to impress is f c king with her husband in the next room ? Really, whoever writes this just go to ........
Saved me the effort in reading this trash If it’s like you say I’m more into anti hero or villain mc gotta be a alpha I don’t like that simp stuff
DearCompanion:Stupid mc who save the world for nothing, he even exhaust all his mana to heal people and repair house of commoners ? Then for the reward he was only given a room to rest ? While the MIL f mortal captain he try to impress is f c king with her husband in the next room ? Really, whoever writes this just go to ........
Tmii:Yea it’s called being a retard there’s nothing to gain in helping others stooopid🖕
Tmii:Saved me the effort in reading this trash If it’s like you say I’m more into anti hero or villain mc gotta be a alpha I don’t like that simp stuff
Hold dis L pretty sure you a simp in rl Mc can’t be smarter than the author right?? authors tend to put some of their personality into them
TricksterDrasvel:So you don't need friends? Ok
No, and I don't think it's good to potray yourself as the MC, even only half of it, unless you are writing book biography or a novel similar with such. If the MC is hero, does that mean the author also hero? Though it can be possible if the author did it, but I feels it kinda wrong.
Tmii:Hold dis L pretty sure you a simp in rl Mc can’t be smarter than the author right?? authors tend to put some of their personality into them
surely you jest author at least make your mc flaw so he can always change to be better than he is now in the long run your mc could be alpha and you could gain plenty experience how to build each character ..... hoping your next project to be better than this one
TricksterDrasvel:No, and I don't think it's good to potray yourself as the MC, even only half of it, unless you are writing book biography or a novel similar with such. If the MC is hero, does that mean the author also hero? Though it can be possible if the author did it, but I feels it kinda wrong.
ArchaniD:surely you jest author at least make your mc flaw so he can always change to be better than he is now in the long run your mc could be alpha and you could gain plenty experience how to build each character ..... hoping your next project to be better than this one
DearCompanion:Author, i mean no offense, i just think that if he doesn't really try to get sakura at this point then all this mission arc is pointless and the protagonist that does anything without a goal would make your novel looks like an *******'s work so yeah... we just hope that he gets her in the end.