Review Detail of SecretWolf in After training for 1,000 years, it's time for me to collect my harem
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Decent start goes down from there. The story starts off in Naruto world which was doing ok. Then the next world was just shit. The problem is the MC after 1000 years is still an absolute idiot. The premise of the story, is him going to a different world and getting his harem. But the author decides to make him a total hero that would not touch another person's girlfriend. The very fact that he will go different world means he will be taking someone's women so the shit reason the Author comes up with trying to justify his action while maintaining the Heroic bullshit that he will not take another is huge plot hole and make you want to puke. In the second world, he lets rapist go one time, another time massacres them. The MC seems like a psychopath without clear reasoning. The Author and plot do everything to make him look heroic but that makes the immersion broken. I do not know why the author wants to make him into a goody-two-shoes, while he goes around collecting harem and yes NTRs people no matter how much the author tries to say otherwise. Had the Author braved it out and just not cared about the stupid rules of not touching another person's women then it would have been decent I can't take it right now. IF it does get better and the MC stops acting like a child let me know I will read ahead but the second arc is where I will stop. The best way to describe the story is there is a pros---ute who wants to be the holiest nun and at the same time hold the best prost---de trophy while getting bangged every night.
After training for 1,000 years, it's time for me to collect my harem
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He is not a hero, he killed them because they pissed him off. He let one go to send a message to the leader that he's coming for him, that also to pull all of the enemies' army back to their headquarter. So what if he didn't take someone's woman? It's not like the world shortage of beautiful women. if you want a story where MC ntr all the girls, then this is not for you.,
What I am saying is that he does NTR, there is that women that has a husband, he gets her. I bet he gets Hinata, Sakura and the others who have people they love and he NTRs them, then hypocritically claims he never steals other's women. He doesn't kill the guards, in the beginning, claiming they were forced, 2 seconds later goes in a killing spree. If he decides he doesn't NTR, good, I know what to expect. But if he NTRs I will hold him accountable. If he says he heroic and forgives people that were forced to do shit. But seconds later doesn't care and goes on killing spree makes it confusing. I like the first Arc everything he does makes sense and exactly as he says. Second arcs he is confused. I do not understand why he goes hero mode second arc. The first arc he only cares about harem and only interferes when they are in danger. The second arc is the problem. I just hope that you can make it constant, you are clearly doing a great job from what you have made in the first arc.
TricksterDrasvel:He is not a hero, he killed them because they pissed him off. He let one go to send a message to the leader that he's coming for him, that also to pull all of the enemies' army back to their headquarter. So what if he didn't take someone's woman? It's not like the world shortage of beautiful women. if you want a story where MC ntr all the girls, then this is not for you.,
No, which woman he pursue has the husband? Claudia? He drops pursuing her. Netorare means stealing someone's woman or man, "It's a genre or a fetish of ***** manga or hentai, which has a (main) story the protagonist has his/her lover stolen by someone. 寝(ne) as in 寝取られ means "sleep", in this case, "the lover's sleeping with someone (cheating)". 取られ(torare) is a noun coming from 取られる(torareru), "have something stolen/robbed"." source:https://hinative.com/en-US/questions/5113392 Hinata and Sakura are not Naruto and Sasuke woman, at the current time, anyone as free as pursuing them. As I said, pissed, the guards in the beginnning don't pissed him, but the more he saw how it was, the more infuriate he was, so he kills them because they touched his bottom line, there is nothing heroic about that. He only cared about the harem, he did, but also someone who understood circumstance, if Naruto was in the situation of the war, he would do the same as in Kuroinu.
NTR is Natori - him stealing others women. Will, in the end, the main point is your writing is good but there is character change in MC from Naruto world to the next one. Wheater you consider the Sakura Hinata NTR is a different question, but when he says he will try his utmost to replace the people in their heart when with Sakura. Certainly does not sound like a person that cares about other men. Anyway, good luck it's your story, do whatever you want.
TricksterDrasvel:No, which woman he pursue has the husband? Claudia? He drops pursuing her. Netorare means stealing someone's woman or man, "It's a genre or a fetish of ***** manga or hentai, which has a (main) story the protagonist has his/her lover stolen by someone. 寝(ne) as in 寝取られ means "sleep", in this case, "the lover's sleeping with someone (cheating)". 取られ(torare) is a noun coming from 取られる(torareru), "have something stolen/robbed"." source:https://hinative.com/en-US/questions/5113392 Hinata and Sakura are not Naruto and Sasuke woman, at the current time, anyone as free as pursuing them. As I said, pissed, the guards in the beginnning don't pissed him, but the more he saw how it was, the more infuriate he was, so he kills them because they touched his bottom line, there is nothing heroic about that. He only cared about the harem, he did, but also someone who understood circumstance, if Naruto was in the situation of the war, he would do the same as in Kuroinu.
SecretWolf:NTR is Natori - him stealing others women. Will, in the end, the main point is your writing is good but there is character change in MC from Naruto world to the next one. Wheater you consider the Sakura Hinata NTR is a different question, but when he says he will try his utmost to replace the people in their heart when with Sakura. Certainly does not sound like a person that cares about other men. Anyway, good luck it's your story, do whatever you want.
hehe, you will understand my plight once you read it :) Anyway, it is worth reading the first arc at least, you might even like the second if close one eye and squint the other. lol
DORAEMON_2V:LOL CALM DOWN YOUR TITS IT'S JUST STORY FICTION LOL JUST READ
the second one is comes from a héntai manga. That world is nasty and really not advisable to be read. Well unless your into that shîtty stuff.
SecretWolf:hehe, you will understand my plight once you read it :) Anyway, it is worth reading the first arc at least, you might even like the second if close one eye and squint the other. lol