Reviews of A Certain Heroic Academia
A Certain Heroic Academia
TSLThanos
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Everythings pretty good so fa…. but… Although rarely sometimes things feel under explained. Another thing is that the dialouge is really… not great. While its understandable and pretty clear its just… missing something? Also, when talking i feel that the characters say to much. The only other thing to note is that sometimes your word choice is rather awkward. Sometimes you use alternate words when something simpiler would’ve read better.
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It's a good fanfic, but still a relatively amateur work. The writing isn't as engaging as some other works, so this can be a huge demerit for those discerning readers who expect quality fanfic from an original ranked novel. There's really not much to say, after all we're still in chapter 4, but I've been enjoying the fanfic, except for the part where misaka had to limit herself to using her power due to her time acting as a vigilante. If she had thought a little better she probably could have used the power as a vigilante only in melee or something like that, so she wouldn't get caught up in magnetism when in the AU. Another point to mention is that the author could spend some time focusing on refining the writing in order to bring more life and personality to the characters. They don't really seem to have much personality with the way things have been done. In conclusion, I recommend this fanfic as a good read for those who are used to it and who understand that we shouldn't expect professionals writing fanfics. Thanks for the good work autor-san, hope to see your progress over time.
Everythings pretty good so fa…. but… Although rarely sometimes things feel under explained. Another thing is that the dialouge is really… not great. While its understandable and pretty clear its just… missing something? Also, when talking i feel that the characters say to much. The only other thing to note is that sometimes your word choice is rather awkward. Sometimes you use alternate words when something simpiler would’ve read better.
I want chopper but found gold(maybe). I just want to say some words here.This fanfic is interesting so far aside from grammar and considering first chapter is important cause the readers will read and decide if this fanfic is worth or not also isn't it so much words I have to read slowly because my brain has a stroke lmao.Jokes aside I just found this fanfic and read the reviews so I read it I guess and then I begin questioning are Author already fix this fanfic or not... Well..I was reading this fanfic and quite excited for more chapters😉.Also I hope you don't drop but this fanfic still new so maybe in future you learn some new things from reader and other else.Oh okay.. I write review a bit too much but oh well what do you expect.Oh well cya goodbye!