Review Detail of kobeblackmamba in A Certain Heroic Academia

Everythings pretty good so fa…. but… Although rarely sometimes things feel under explained. Another thing is that the dialouge is really… not great. While its understandable and pretty clear its just… missing something? Also, when talking i feel that the characters say to much. The only other thing to note is that sometimes your word choice is rather awkward. Sometimes you use alternate words when something simpiler would’ve read better.