Reincarnated into House of the Dragon as a Tyrell

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so ive read upto chapter 69 as of this review and i can say its alright for a binge but it requires patience and to realise the main character will sit around and intimidate people and that would lead you to think the plot changes but it doesnt, the only significant change is helena not dying and so far aegon iii not marrying jaehara and corlys dying earlier. he doesnt use his dragon and there is no slice of life parts that develop him as a character its just him explaining his inaction and getting glazed as a god for "predicting" the future while also seemingly beholden to "fate" so he cant change anything much yet he never tried. If he tested his ability by trying to stop aemonds eye incident and it still happened id understand but he didnt he was just a background character when it happend. overall the writing is decent as i can read it and the punctuation and grammar is alright and i applaud the use of paragraphs but the story itself is bland and wasnt even political as he never made any alliances or contact anyone out the reach at all to create more influence . and if your looking for a targeryan mc who gets in dragon battles or drama this isnt for you but if you are up to date on your fics and need to feed binge addictions its ok otherwise i wouldnt bother

I read it simply because I like Game of Thrones. An alternative title for this fic could be "House of the Dragons, a Tyrel point of view," because that's what I read. The protagonist knows the future perfectly, is born as the heir and future Lord Tyrel, and NOTHING CHANGES. He makes several "changes" in his territory, even destroying a noble house, training 50,000 professional soldiers, and losing almost all of them in a battle, WHICH CHANGES NOTHING. He spends 25 years plotting, training professional troops—by the way, the largest professional army in Westeros—he tames Vermithor, the second largest dragon alive, and DOES NOTHING. He takes him flying twice like walking a dog, and in the only battle he fights, he doesn't take the damn biggest dragon; he goes on horseback and fights on the ground, leaving the sky to an untrained and inexperienced knight who dies in the first 10 minutes of battle. He spends the entire war maintaining "neutrality," and those who should die still die, just like in the script. He does nothing for his love interest, Helena still marries Egon, gives birth to the twins, has to choose which one dies on the night of the assassination, all the members of the Black faction die, JUST LIKE in the canon, and the final king is still Egon III. The only minimal difference is that Helena is alive, with him "rescuing" her at the END of the war, after everything she suffered, and some dragons survived. If that was your plan, and you're saying the plot truly begins now, then you FAILED MISERABLY. 60 chapters could be summarized in 2: one for the few changes he implemented in the plains, and another for the Dance of Dragons, since he didn't interfere in ANYTHING. The only minimal change would have been him killing Egon while he was fleeing King's Landing, but a few chapters later he returns and, in truth, the protagonist didn't kill him; he was tricked by the assassin he sent. In other words, NOTHING CHANGED.