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Although there is a new MC it is still very good.
I really tried my best ignoring it but....man I can't help but feel that the majority of this fic is written by ChatGPT. That overly descriptive type of writing is just too obvious. TBH I would be okay with it. This is not the first fic I read that used ChatGPT but this is just too much. Use it sparingly, please. Some may notice and not mind or may not notice at all but for me who read over five hundred + webnovels at this point, it's just so off putting. I know you are a newbie author but relying on AI in terms of writing and using it as a crutch is never good. Based on my experience the ones who usually improve the fastest are those who don't rely on such things...yes, the first chapters may be un-edited and rough but their stories vastly improve every succeeding volume. Don't make AI a crutch.
oof
evening?
tf, then he could just spam Fire Ring...or any stronger magic and he will be invincible.
I have high expectations for this fanfic. Rarely have I seen LotM fanfics as most only contain a few chapters. So for my impressions. I can't really state any definitive comment as I have only read 10 chapters but so far it has been interesting. The MC is okay and is kinda likable, plot is straightforward, as for side characters I can't really say much as I'm still 10 chapters in and his interactions with others are rare. No glaring grammar and spelling flaws. The word count is also long which makes every chapter a worthwhile read. Overall, a satisfying and interesting read so far, really hoping that this continues and shape into a more interesting story as I can see so much potential. Kudos to the author, you are doing well and I really hope that this story will last for a long time. 9.6/10 for me as of chapter 10 tldr: Pros: >MC is not an idiot at least >Has LotM elements >Word count per chapter is long >No Glaring Grammar and Spelling mistakes >Straightforward Plot Cons: >Due to the Straightforward Plot established in the premise it can get predictable but predictable plot doesn't always mean bad execution. As long as the author executes the plot well and introduces characters and worlds with depth it should be fine.
COI is Good~
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This is without a doubt a gem of a fanfic. The story, the characters...I can't help but be immersed. This brings back the same feeling when I read my very first HP fanfic and I thought to myself. Fanfiction can sometimes be better than the original. I love the MCs mindset, his interaction with other characters, the other characters' impression of him, the plot progression is also solid. I have only one thing to say about the author...you are doing a good job. Keep cooking.