Andrew_Basnet
The fight makes no sense. You're telling me that he can't even slice through a bit of metal but can leave a scratch on Adamantium? If he just attacked Magneto, all he could do to stop this invisible attack is making a metal barrier. As powerful as Magneto is, he can only rely on surrounding metal and I don't think he has any lying around that is as hard as Adamantium.
Thanks for the work. I think you tried to balance the fight and as such, counters Kai assault but it does seems a bit off as others said, glaring plot holes in the way it was done x) Nevertheless, if we put it aside it's an interesting fight. Really like the bit about Xavier mind controlling him, it made me want Kai to let loose on the man.
I've seen a lot of stories like this, the MC won't kill anyone (unless the author surprises me), why can't he kill Magneto easily??? Why doesn't he kill them? Why doesn't he cut Wolverine, but instead avoids him??? Just cut him into very small pieces and then throw him away.... You are uselessly prolonging the battle and reducing the power of the MC, remember that their bodies are just humans, perhaps the pinnacle of humanity... He could cut them off before they realize it, why wouldn't you??? This kind of stretching reminded me of Chinese stories. Now the first thing you should do is make the balance of power constant and also make it so that no one can read the MC's mind. Note: Even with two fingers the MC can kill them.