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broooo , i was hoping for thor interaction cause your loki is too good character
it feels like the author is slowly making the mc merciful and at the end he will make him forgive the devils, just like usual fanfiction no twist or anything , hoping to see mc really annihilate the devil not showing mercy to anyone even if they are main cast characters like vali, rias, riser,etc. feels cringey as most of the time authors make the mc merciful in the name of character development
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can he get a template from angels of dragon ball cause they are white hairs?
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ki** the guy who was saved by tsunade
i understand and respect you as an author . but as a reader let me ask you , in 40 chapters did the main character change anything or contribute anything to the story. Did he not just only help rias and only befriend main cast? Did he had any of his own adventures, and i was not asking for change of species , other factions can be joined without any changes in species, if he needs something interesting he could have joined hero faction , as they are more entertaining as mentioned when he wanted to visit phenex. I just don't really see the reason for tolerance towards the main cast even in chapter 40 you made it so he became friends with issei, even when all issei thinks and talks garbage , let me ask you , would anyone not get tired and irritated to just bash or let out anger towards a person such as issei , you made it seem like issei is genuine but he is actually just another raiser in the show just without arrogance of a nobel, and by befriending issei means he will have to help the main cast every time , and just as i said in my original post he is just a bodyguard and will now join the three faction meeting then will participate in the fight. it always happens like this as i have read 100s of dxd fanfiction , same plot nothing different just names, i mean all i ever see the main character interaction with the main cast no oc , like there no one lives in the town except them, feels empty , what about other characters like Valerie who needs help , if main character knows plot he surely know the rias's suffering is nothing compared to others , then if he helps rias shouldn't he also helps others , like prevention of asia healing a devil, and others. also i am confused about the personality of the main character as he always change his decision and thoughts just like first how he fears change of timeline in first few chapters then he barges in raiser situation and helps rias , then became too close with issei.Then he exactly does what he finds troublesome. at this point i see him nothing other than a pawn and being manipulated by devils in doing their work. i just know that every devil has a sin in dxd they are not naive or innocent as shown in anime , they are very manipulative and mc feels like he is just being naive and manipulated by issei and satan.