Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel/Xmen:Yuta Okkotsu

The chapter

As far as i know the strongest in jjk isnt even continental and he starts weak with invincible and martian manhunter he would have instantly become godlike i understand u wanted ur mc to have these abilites but if hes given better options readers will naturally dislike him picking a weaker option those 2 shouldnt have been an option in the first place if he was given lesser options where it actually made sense to choose this one it wouldve been better

You should actually write out the dialogue, if you just keep writing a summary of event then your readers will lose interest quickly. Yous should also slow down the pacing because everything in this chapter happened jarringly fast.

I like Jjk with a passion so watched but please slow down abit and show more and tell less, it's kind of jarring going to slicing someone with a knife to them "talking" and then the MC surrendering.

1) Martian Manhunter would have been OP in this world. Especially if he can become a burning Martian. He likely could have used psychics to help him remove the fire weakness and unlock burning Martian state. 2) I don’t like the limit on the copying power. 3) I think the MC should have a cursed spirit like Rika to protect him.

As long as you take off his 5 minutes limit then give Him the wheel of mahoraga then I am ok 😂

Nice prolouge.

He is smart.

"....." Speak '.......' Thought

Its good and has a lot of potential. Only critic i have is you skipping dialogue and rushing to the mansion all in one go. Hopefully this changes in the future other than that i really like it so far. Keep up the good work. Ps if you dont like writing dialogue just use chat gpt

thnx for the chapter

Nice

seems interesting more chapters please

a promising start. I hope for a continuation

Seems fun, although was the story dropped, considering how long it’s been since it’s been updated?

Dropped like a hot potato

Nice chapter