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1emanresU1dCommentedWhat about all the different healing magics and potions, I'm sure a contender for no.1 familia in the world could afford treatment. I'm pretty sure there are potions that can practically bring someone back from the brink of death and restore their bodies no matter what in the lore.
All of Loki's top familia members were injured in the altercation with Kratos, but the worst was the one before her, Finn. Her Captain, the only one other than Riveria that she could rely on to keep the rest in line. His trachea was pulverized by the terrifyingly strong Kratos, and while he would eventually recover, Fels, the one that had healed the Palum had told Loki that he would never be able to speak again. On top of this already tragic result, Finn would need to be fed by a tube through his stomach.- 1emanresU2dCommented
Wouldn't Bete notice this first, aren't beastmen supposed to have better senses, I don't think the single level difference between him and Riveria would put her so far above him.
A stalking silence permeates the air, and Riveria slowly peels her eyes open, "Do you feel that?" she says while staring into Ais' yellow eyes. The Sword princess tilts her head in confusion, but she soon realizes what Riveria speaks of. The stone beneath her boots thuds, again and again, each thud seeming to be closer than the last. - 1emanresU2dReplied to Bulale_Abali
You showed him reacting to Tony Stark??
He then stood over the corpse of the figure, draped in red ninja clothing, but strangely enough, there were no emotions on his face—no regret, nothing, no overwhelming nausea. "I should probably sort this out," he thought to himself as he sorted his wound first before putting the figure in a trash bag after cleaning any fingerprints and traces that could be linked back to him. He then sorted his house so that nothing looked tarnished before carrying the figure out of the house. Since it was still late at night, Henry was not that concerned about being seen he though hard and while before a crazy idea popped onto his mind, "its risky but i should be able to figure some information about the people behind him" he pondered before deciding to dump the body in a dumpster, yes, a dumpster, before he returned home. - 1emanresU2dCommented
What info does he need to figure out, he knows he's in Marvel and the dude was clearly dressed as a hand ninja?
He then stood over the corpse of the figure, draped in red ninja clothing, but strangely enough, there were no emotions on his face—no regret, nothing, no overwhelming nausea. "I should probably sort this out," he thought to himself as he sorted his wound first before putting the figure in a trash bag after cleaning any fingerprints and traces that could be linked back to him. He then sorted his house so that nothing looked tarnished before carrying the figure out of the house. Since it was still late at night, Henry was not that concerned about being seen he though hard and while before a crazy idea popped onto his mind, "its risky but i should be able to figure some information about the people behind him" he pondered before deciding to dump the body in a dumpster, yes, a dumpster, before he returned home. - 1emanresU2dCommented
All of the MC's parameters should have still been within human limits even with the potion, there was no way he would have won against a trained hand ninja in any universe in the Marvel multiverse. Martial arts in the Marvel universe are way more overpowered than IRL. In agents of shield, we see shield agents like may beating actually superhuman soldiers, a fraud like the MC would get stomped by any random thug in the world let alone a trained assasin.
However, Henry didn't have much time as he grabbed the figure and pushed him against the wall. The figure wanted to punch Henry again, but Henry brought down his chest, tanking the punch, and then headbutted the figure. Henry then picked up the figure over his head, who continuously punched Henry in the head. Henry ignored the punches as well as the pain from the blows raining down on him and slammed the assassin into the wall with all his might. The sickening crack of the assassin's neck signaled the end of the fight. - 1emanresU2dCommented
I hate when a character gets thrown around when he should be killed instantly, it's really bad writing to make other characters braindead just to push the story in the direction you want. If you can't make something happen logically and organically then it shouldn't happen.
The figure didn't stop there. With lightning speed, he kicked Henry so hard that the wind was knocked out of his lungs, sending him tumbling back and hitting his furniture along the way. The figure moved toward Henry at a speed that looked like a blur, before punching Henry with the thenar space in his hand, nearly breaking Henry's windpipe. The figure then grabbed Henry by the face and threw him toward his bedroom, causing Henry to hit his nightstand with his back, knocking him unconscious for a brief second before he woke up. - 1emanresU2dCommented
Alchemist
[Class: Alchemy: lv.1 (25%)] - 1emanresU2dReplied to Bulale_AbaliCh 2 settling in(chapter 2)
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Just 'shriek' into the microphone, they'll never make you sing again.
Visibly deflating from the news, Mara could only curse her big mouth… or rather curse with her big mouth, "Fucking Murphy, man. Such a bullshit law." - 1emanresU3dCommented
*Midgard's*
Breaking off the hug, and gently pushing his mother off him, Thor answered her, "That is Red Crown, Earth's mightiest warrior and the main reason I was able to return home. Loki sent the Destroyer to kill me and our friends, but Red Crown fended off the automaton until I could regain my right to wield Mjolnir and defeat it. Fret not though mother, there shall be no killing. Loki must pay for his crimes against Asgard. Is that understood Red Crown?" - 1emanresU3dCommented
*rapport*
Shaking his head in vehement denial, Thor retorted, "A proud warrior such as I would never do something so shameful! I am glad that you have built a strong repertoire with my partner, but I believe I am worthy enough to take her back now. Your words and actions to protect all the innocent lives through fighting a perilous duel with a foe such as the Destroyer, are an inspiration and standard I hope to rise to match." - 1emanresU3dCommented
Please stop trying to use logic to explain away the poor writing of the movies, it makes it hard to really get immersed into the story because of how convoluted these explanations are. I think it would be better just to ignore the plot holes rather than cover them with a blanket and say they're not there.
Taking a few seconds to think about what I had highlighted, Mara eventually found a somewhat believable answer, in our eyes at least, [Plausible deniability. If the US government, or the world council that S.H.I.E.L.D. falls under, discover that S.H.I.E.L.D. willingly sent innocents to their death as part of some experiment there would be serious repercussions. However, if they have proof that their agents 'tried' to stop the intruder, but failed, they would be able to avoid most of the fault. Of course it would make their agents look incompetent, but that's better than human sacrifice for the pensioners running the organisations I mentioned. This would also explain why the site doesn't have thermal imaging yet, even if Jasper's excuse was that it wasn't part of the standard quarantine equipment, as it gives even more credence to the argument that there was no prior warning for the infiltration - so the security staff were caught unprepared.] - 1emanresU3dCommented
Why are you bringing IRL physics into this now, in an earlier chapter she broke the sound barrier and created a crater in the ground by jumping, if that's possible then all of the things you're currently debunking should be, right?
Someone might think that just studying something like an Eagle, and replicating their biology while increasing the size would be the correct solution, but that is far from the truth. Even an Eagle itself doesn't stay in the air by moving its wings and is predominantly airborne through the use of updrafts. Essentially, it glides more than it literally flies. For a human to develop wings with the same power, weight for weight, as an Eagle, it would require a breast surpassing 1 metre in length just to house the muscles to operate the wings. That's not to mention that weight would need to be economised, and therefore the legs would need to be reduced to twigs, like an actual bird's legs. Thus, changing the conditions and making it closer to a bird than a human. - 1emanresU4dCommented
2 tons is like the weight of a car, if agent form is about 40% as strong as her full symbiote form that means she can only lift the weight of 2, max 3 cars, that feels weak, especially after so many bonding sessions.
"Well fuck me sideways, that was badass! Never thought I'd see the day I could destroy a boulder with a single punch, even if it was with help. Let's make our way back to the mansion, El, and you can fill me in on the bond details you mentioned." - 1emanresU4dCommented
They/them just sounds really awkward and wrong when referring to one person especially if it's over and over again. It'd sound better if you used he/she or it.
Confirm her hypothesis, Mara nodded, "Yeah, but El said they're still not speaking to you. They say you've been really rude to me and if it was up to them, you'd have already got the dirt treatment. But, since I like you, they've been holding back. Oh, dirt is what they called the woman they exploded by the way." - 1emanresU5dReplied to 1emanresU
*a call*
"Huh. I guess I need to be proactive in getting her help then. Hey J.A.R.V.I.S. do I have permission to use your capabilities to give Natalie a bell?" - 1emanresU5dReplied to Dracon186
A British phrase for call.
"Huh. I guess I need to be proactive in getting her help then. Hey J.A.R.V.I.S. do I have permission to use your capabilities to give Natalie a bell?" - 1emanresU5dCommented
I'm really enjoying this novel but these quips are pure cringe.
"-You any good at Fruit Ninja?" - 1emanresU5dCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4) – Take On The World