writing style is fine, still missing a couple words like "the" here and there, but everything still makes sense when you are reading it so it's not too distracting.
no entiendo mucho lo del lado oscuro de konoha, es una aldea militar que entrena niños para ser asesinos, no creo que lo esten ocultando mucho que digamos
Author !! .YOUR OVERUSING UISNG! !!!!! !! CAN YOU MINIMIZE USING THIS? IT'S TOO ANNOYING AND DISTRACTING TO READ...YOUR STILL USING AND EXCLAMATION MARK EVEN IF IT'S UNECESSARY IN EVERY DIALOGUE.. .