X-Men: Onslaught

-Writing quality: Is simply great, -Stability of Update: Multiple chapters a day (Seriously author don't overwork yourself to death) -Story Development: The story has potential, and author is not wasting any of it. -Character Design: Mc is relatable and realistic same as all the side characters. -World Background: I'm not very knowledgeable about Marvel comics, but I can tell that author knows what he's doing and I don't feel left out honestly. I Think this story deserves my 5.0 stars and more, if you're reading this, give this story a try you won't regret it.

The main character is just boring, my biggest complaints are that the main character doesn’t change mentally. His buddy buddy with his bully(that almost killed him) then after weeks of torture he had no problems, like torture f@&$ a person’s mind up, but no he didn’t have any trauma after that. He is too goodi too shoe.

Intolerable MC makes this novel unreadable in my opinion. The MCs power is a kind of adaptability, everyone including him knows this. We get this sob story about how awful his life has been because he is a cripple, which is almost instantly solved just from him getting injured once and adapting. We find out then, that regardless of his woes and all the intelligent scientists and X-MEN that no one has ever suggested that the MC train physically at all or check to see his adaption. It is as if the MC and everyone else has made literally zero effort, not even a paper cut on his arm, to see how he adapts. On top of that we get the fking sob story from the goodie two shoes MC about him being a cripple while he was too stupid and lazy to do literally anything at all to improve his situation. I also skipped to the most recent chapter and the MC goes on this cringe “life is sacred” “no kill rant” and has to force himself to kill a man who r*ped 20 children to save an innocent little girls life. If that will not give you a clue with how delusional and pathetic this MC is then by all means you might enjoy reading this. Lastly, I hate the MCs written accent, it is annoying to read, and his demeanor, personality, incompetentence, softness, and idioicy disgust me beyond belief.