[MHA] Kirishima, the Fist King

Right now the process is really great. I like the way you combine martial art with quirk but I hope to see the development of quirk more and also please start the high school part quickly I am excited.

overall I don't know anything about but I always wanted one on this character so I deeply want to believe that it going to be good

The story itself is good, but I don't like a few details. I like it when authors don't distort the world as they please but treat the original with respect, so I'll point out a few inconsistencies: The opinion that martial arts are abandoned in MHA and All Might is just a meathead without technique completely contradicts the canon. This is a typical fanfiction trope to artificially elevate the MC. In reality, close combat thrives in this world: there is Gunhead's official martial arts school, Ojiro literally bears the title "Martial Arts Hero," and Aizawa takes out crowds of enemies using only hand-to-hand combat while erasing their quirks. The complaint about All Might is also off the mark. He was trained by Gran Torino—a master of speed and timing. Toshinori's style is not a lack of technique, but perfect biomechanics for his level of power. Doing Taekwondo spinning kicks for a guy who changes the weather with one punch is just pointless and inefficient. Yes, young quirk-centric characters (like Todoroki at the beginning) neglect CQC, but the world itself definitely hasn't abandoned martial arts. Also, I don't really understand this craving for martial arts if he wants to become a hero. Combat sports teach you to win on points or score a knockout. Heroes have a different task—to detain and neutralize, and often in a crowd of civilians. A boxer will just beat the enemy up instead of restraining them.