Comments of chapter undefined of Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

I like where you went with this. there is bound to be a disconnect between his memories of reading their story and actually being there in person to experience their story with them. the amount of weight on his shoulders is immense. he's come to fact that he knows things aren't a game and that his involvement can derail everything from the way things are supposed to happen. the crew members insights make sense. as the saying goes "can't see the forest from the trees", MC has got to accept his place on the crew. with all that said, I think this was a really good chapter. it needed to happen for us readers to get everyone's perspective on things. good work.

Great way to show the actual emotional difference between An anime show and it becoming someone's new reality . . 🙏🙏🙏

thx for the chp this was really great❤ the characters are well written the emotions where also on point, truly you're a great author🖤 this made me really emotional cant wait to read more🤍

im fine

moree

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This will be one of those special chapters to remember in this great story. I hope that the future does not fall or change the very human course that the character takes.

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Really want to see how you keep this story going now that MC is sidelined for 5 months, the once a week rule is pretty pointless considering how long the SH fights last every arc. No training is also a bit disappointing since he will be stagnant while everyone else improves. Oh well, guess I will just wait and see

Thanks for chapter

Nice going there author While reducing the gap, this also made the crew think he too had that extremely weak emotional side despite his strong will in battles and develop him into the full fledged Vice-Captain of the crew

i like how u brought about this but still hate how u have his fruit not heal him when he’s betting his training ie shouldnt that also include his muscles healing just saying also he could bet his current health to heal him like i bet that i’m able to survive in a blizzard for one hour and if he does he can heal himself just saying devil fruits use obstract concepts

Thanks for the chapter

I aprove, you did well in transmitting the feelings as well as expressisng the characters interpretations of the situation, hope to continue reading more of your story!

ORRRRAAAHH!! Character development!!!

great chapter had me tearing up

thank you for the update! it's great chapter and idk what to say, here take my power stone

Thanks 🙏 for the chapter but are you really going to let Mikita go please don’t I think it would rather make the story more interesting seeing different character development along the line like Mikita realizing her dream and finally becoming a straw hat because after betraying crocodile she won’t be able to go back to Baroque Works after all is said and done.